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Band 5+: The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period

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The image shows a graph with three lines from 1953 to 1983. Price of color TV: 1953 - none, 1963 - 100,000 Yen, 1973 - 60,000 Yen, 1983 - 50,000 Yen. Price of black and white TV: 1953 - 90,000 Yen, 1963 - 30,000 Yen, 1973 - 10,000 Yen, 1983 - 5,000 Yen. Salary: 1953 - 20,000 Yen, 1963 - 40,000 Yen, 1973 - 60,000 Yen, 1983 - 100,000 Yen.

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The chart illustrates the average Japanese wage, price of color TV and price of black and white TV over a period of 30 years starting from 1953.

Overall, there was a decreasing trend in the price of color TV and black and white TV while the opposite was true for the average Japanese wage. In addition, the cost of color TV was the highest among the mentioned country.

To begin with, around 110 thousand yen was the cost of black and white TV in 1953. Subsequently, its figure slump to 40 thousand yen after 10 years. This number continued to decrease to 20 thousand yen in 1983. There was a decrease in that color Tv from 100 thousand yen in 1953 to around 47 thousand yen in 1983.

Alternatively, being the last in the first year was the average Japanese wage with approximately 18 thousand yen, however, it continually rose and surpassed the other two in around 1970 and1979, respectively and terminated at approximately 67 thousand yen in 1983.

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