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Band 4+: The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar chart showing percentages for Watching and Participating in various sports. The data is as follows: Football (Watching: 45%, Participating: 10%), Rugby (Watching: 30%, Participating: 20%), Basketball (Watching: 38%, Participating: 25%), Badminton (Watching: 29%, Participating: 25%), Fishing (Watching: 15%, Participating: 50%), and Horse riding and racing (Watching: 45%, Participating: 18%).

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male aged 16-25 who prefer watching sports and who prefer participating in a particular country

Overall,the percentage of males watching exceeded that of participating sports. Another outstanding feature is that fishing was the most popular sport among male who loves participating while the majority of watching-lovers show the penchart for football or horse riding and racing

Fishing registered the highest figure which stood at 50% . This was followed by basketball and badminton. The figure football,rugby,horse rding and racing was significantly lowe numbering 16% on avarage

Both football, horse riding and racing came top of the list . The second and third most popular items were basketball and rugby with 38% and 30% respectively,while badminton was lower by a margin of 2%. Last of list was fishing with 15%

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participating: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and identifies some key trends, such as the preference for watching over participating and the popularity of fishing in the participation category. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some figures are presented inaccurately or are difficult to interpret (e.g., the '16% on average' calculation), and there are several typographical errors ('penchart', 'rding', 'avarage') that occasionally hinder readability. To improve, ensure that all data points are reported precisely as shown in the visual and focus on organizing the comparisons more logically to avoid repetitive or confusing sentence structures. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat disjointed, making it difficult for the reader to follow the logical flow of information. While there is an attempt at an overview, the transition between describing 'participation' and 'watching' is abrupt. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic (e.g., one paragraph for watching trends and another for participating trends) and use cohesive devices such as 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Regarding...' to link your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'penchart', 'rding', 'avarage') and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'watching-lovers', 'most popular items'). There is also some confusion in word choice, such as using 'items' to refer to sports. Aim to use more precise academic vocabulary and ensure that spelling is accurate to avoid distracting the reader from your analysis.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the report, including issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'male who loves'), pluralization (e.g., 'male aged'), and sentence structure. Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with spacing after commas and periods. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures and ensure that singular and plural nouns are used correctly in relation to their verbs.

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