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Band 5+: The graphs below show data on Australian trades with three other countries.

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The image features three line graphs detailing imports and exports across the years 2002, 2003, 2004, and 2005. Trade with China shows imports at 4 in 2002, rising to 4.5 in 2003, and decreasing to 3.5 in 2004 and 3 in 2005; exports at 3.5 in 2002, declining to 3 in 2003, increasing to 4 in 2004, and remaining at 4 in 2005. Trade with USA indicates imports increasing from 1.5 in 2002 to 2 in 2003, remaining at 2 in 2004 and slightly increasing to 2.5 in 2005; exports at 2.5 in 2002, rising to 3 in 2003, steadying at 3.5 in 2004 before a small decrease to 3 in 2005. Trade with Japan presents imports at 1 in 2002 and 2003, doubling to 2 in 2004, and staying at 2 in 2005; exports at 1.5 in 2002, slightly increasing to 1.7 in 2003, then rising to 2.5 in 2004 and maintaining at 2.5 in 2005.

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The line graph provides information about the value of trade between Australia and three countries, namely China, the USA and Japan, from 2002 to 2005, in billions of Australian dollars.

Overall, exports were higher than imports in all three trading relationships throughout the period, except for China in 2008. The most significant change was a marked increase from China, while trade with the US remained relatively stable and exports to Japan fluctuated considerably.

Recording China, Australia exported goods to both China and Japan worth around 40 billion AUD (Australian Dollars) in 2002. Australia imported approximately AUD 30 billion from China and about 35 billion AUD in Japan.

After falling to around 20 billion dollars in 2005 imports from China increased markedly and reached approximately 40 billion AUD in 2008, surpassing the value of exports. Although exports to Japan changed only slightly by 2005, they then rose sharply to a peak of around 65 billion dollars before declining to 50 billion AUD at the end of the period. Meanwhile, imports from Japan are gradual and slight decline at around AUD 30 billion throughout the period. Exports to China saw a similar trend, remaining almost constant.

Trades with the US remained almost unchanged at 20 billion AUD. However, import values grew slightly to approximately 25 billion dollars.

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billion: 10

china: 8

japan: 5

exports: 5

around: 4

australia: 3

imports: 3

period: 3

approximately: 3

dollars: 3

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Task Response

The report struggles significantly with data accuracy and consistency, which impacts the overall task achievement. There are several instances where the report mentions years (such as 2008) that are outside the scope of the provided data (2002-2005). Additionally, the numerical values reported (e.g., 40 billion, 65 billion) deviate substantially from the figures provided in the visual description (which uses single digits like 4, 3.5, etc.). To improve, ensure that all data points and timeframes mentioned strictly align with the provided visual information and maintain a consistent scale throughout the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report suffers from significant issues with logical progression and coherence. While there is an attempt at paragraphing, the information is presented in a confusing manner. The overview contains references to years (2008) that are not present in the data range, and the body paragraphs jump between countries and trends in a way that makes it difficult for the reader to follow the actual data trends. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic (e.g., one paragraph for China, one for the USA, etc.) and that the chronological flow is maintained.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and, more importantly, often used incorrectly in context. There is a lack of precision in describing the trends. For example, the report uses terms like 'fluctuated considerably' and 'rose sharply' which may not accurately reflect the data provided. Additionally, there is inconsistent use of currency notation (AUD, Australian Dollars, dollars). Aim for a more consistent and precise range of academic vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'plateaued', 'dipped', 'surpassed').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, such as 'imports from Japan are gradual and slight decline', which is ungrammatical. There are also issues with tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that your verb forms (especially when describing trends in the past) are used accurately.

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