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Band 6+: The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows three maps from 1800, 1900, and 2000. In 1800, Brindell, Farmland (crops), Farmland (animals), River Stour, and Woodland are shown. In 1900, Brindell, Farmland (crops), Woodland, River Stour, Industry, Bun Hill, and Village for workers are illustrated. In 2000, Brindell, Farmland (crops), Woodland, River Stour, Industry, Bun Hill, Village for workers, and Park are displayed.

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These maps show the modification of Brindell between 1800 and 2000

Overall, the three maps present the urbanization and industrialization of Brindell, with the introduction of a village for workers, industrial area, and Bun hill park

Starting at 1800, there were five main locations on the rear of the map, that being crop farmland, woodland, river stour, Brindell, and animals farmland.

In 1900, however, the woodland shrunk, resulting in a wider river stour. On the opposite side, the animals’ farmland became larger, along with it being repurposed into an industrial area. The industrial area consisted of factories near the river stour, and a hill with a village for the workers. Brindell, which is near the Bun hill, remained unchanged

Finally in 2000, the woodland was even smaller, but Bun hill park was added on the rear of the woodland. More factories were added on the opposite sides, and Bun hill was widened along with the village for workers. Brindell also expanded along with the industrial location, making the river stour the smallest it has ever been.

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brindell: 5

industrial: 4

woodland: 4

river: 4

stour: 4

village: 3

workers: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main changes in Brindell over the period, noting the urbanization and industrialization. The description of each map is generally clear, but there could be more precise comparisons between the maps to highlight the key trends. For example, quantifying the changes in woodland size or the expansion of the industrial area would strengthen the analysis. Also, the writing could be more concise and avoid some minor inaccuracies (e.g., the river doesn't widen due to the woodland shrinking). Consider using more precise language and focusing on the most significant changes to improve the overall impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences to guide the reader. Transitions between time periods are present but could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit basic (e.g., 'became larger,' 'was even smaller'). Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language to showcase a wider range of vocabulary. For example, instead of 'became larger,' you could use 'expanded significantly' or 'underwent substantial growth.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and impact clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. Proofreading carefully for these errors will improve the overall grammatical accuracy.

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