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Band 6+: The line graph and the table show the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph categorized by trip purpose and a table showing the total number of trips in millions. The total trips were: 1989, 47; 1992, 55,5; 1995, 68; 1998, 73,5; 2001, 61. The breakdown of trips by purpose in millions is as follows: For holidays, the values for 1989, 1992, 1995, 1998, and 2001 were 30, 36, 43, 50, and 40, respectively. For business, the values were 8, 9, 10, 9,5, and 7. For family visits, the values were 5, 6, 7, 9, and 12. For other purposes, the values were 4, 4,5, 8, 5, and 2.

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The graph demonstrates the number of journeys to other countries by people from the UK and the reason for visiting over the period of 12 years, starting in 1989. Additionally, the table illustrates the total number of these visits for the same years.

Overall, while there was an upward trend in holidays and family reason, other reasons had a downward trend. While the most significant reason was holidays, the total number of visits gradually increased before plummetingтng in the final year.

Looking at the line graph, the number of holidays trips is the highest figure, starting at 30 million in 1989. In 1998 this category had a peak, with 50 million, but plunged to approximately 38 in 2001. In contrast, a different pattern was observed with family visits, this figure grew over the period, peaking in 2001 at about 12-13 million trips. Meanwhile, business and other purposes followed a similar pattern, increasing marginally by 1995 to 10 and 7 million trips respectively. In the last year, these reasons fell to eight and two million, making ”other purposes’ the least common reason for travelling.

Regarding the table, the total number of trips recorded steady surge, reaching an apex of 73,5 million in 1998, before declining to 61 million. Moreover, the total number of trips and holidays had a similar figure, reaching a peak in 1998 and plunged in 2001

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million: 7

number: 6

trips: 5

reason: 4

total: 4

holidays: 4

other: 3

visits: 3

figure: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the graph and table. The overview is acceptable, and the body paragraphs present relevant data and comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and a few areas where more specific data could have been included to strengthen the analysis. To improve, ensure data accuracy and provide more precise figures when describing trends and comparisons. Also, focus on clearly linking the data from both the graph and the table to provide a more cohesive and comprehensive overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, with a clear overall structure. However, the introduction could be more precise in identifying the subject of the data (London Natural History Museum visitors, not general travel). The organization into paragraphs is logical, but transitions between some sentences and ideas could be smoother. For instance, the shift from the line graph analysis to the table analysis in the final paragraph feels somewhat abrupt. Consider using transitional phrases to link ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of repeatedly using "number of trips," consider alternatives like "visitor count," "frequency of visits," or "volume of travel." While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, enhancing the sophistication of word choices could elevate the report. Also, check for accuracy in word usage (e.g., "plummeting" might be too strong a word in some contexts).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. For example, "While there was an upward trend in holidays and family reason" contains a grammatical error ('reason' should be 'reasons'). Also, the sentence "Moreover, the total number of trips and holidays had a similar figure" is not entirely clear and could be rephrased for better accuracy. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and correct tense selection. Proofreading carefully for these errors will improve the report's grammatical accuracy.

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