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Band 5+: The line graph below gives information about men and women smokers in Bhutan from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Men & Women Smokers in Bhutan (per 1000)" from 1960 to 2000 at intervals of 5 years; Men smokers: 1960-600, 1965-550, 1970-525, 1975-500, 1980-450, 1985-425, 1990-400, 1995-375, 2000-350; Women smokers: 1960-75, 1965-150, 1970-200, 1975-250, 1980-300, 1985-350, 1990-325, 1995-300, 2000-275.

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The given line graphcompares the foreign trade of wheat in Australia, Canada, Europe Community overthe period from 1985 to 1990. Ove

rall, it is clear thatthree countries witnessed various trends over 5 years. In general, the highestfigures were recorded for Canada, whereas lowest values were observed inAustralia. At the

beginning of theperiod, wheat exportation in Australia stood at approximately 15 million oftons. This figure then experienced minor improvement reaching around 16 millionafter 1 year, followed by significant downfall come to 11 million by 1990. Bycontrast, European Community showed an opposite trend in exports, increasingfrom 16 million to approximately 21 million. This figure fell to 14 million in1986, subsequently there was slow rise in the number of exports afterwitnessing steadiness during 1 year from 1987 to 1988. Regarding Can

ada’s figurein overseas trade, in 1985 demonstrated highest points among other countries byhaving around 19 million tons of exportations. Afterwards, this number fell to17 million in 1986, however then soared drastically to 25 million tons in 1988.1989 saw a rapid collapse in exports plummeted to 14 million of tons. Finally,this figure increased gradually in 1990 to the number approximately 19 millionof tons.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing trends and providing specific data points. However, there is a significant discrepancy between the task description (wheat exports) and the visual description provided (smoking in Bhutan). While the report follows the wheat export theme, it is impossible to verify the accuracy of the data against the provided visual description. To improve, ensure that all trends are clearly linked to the specific timeframes mentioned and focus on grouping data logically to avoid a repetitive 'year-by-year' list format. Additionally, pay attention to word choice and spacing to improve the overall flow and professionalism of the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information by country, which is a logical approach. However, the progression of ideas is often interrupted by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors. There is a lack of smooth transitions between sentences, making the reading experience somewhat disjointed. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In terms of...', 'Following this...', 'Conversely...') and ensure that each sentence flows logically into the next. Avoid starting sentences with numbers directly; instead, use phrases like 'The year 1989 saw...' or 'In 1989, the figure...'

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and contains several inaccuracies in word choice and collocation. For example, 'significant downfall come to' and 'rapid collapse in exports plummeted' are unidiomatic. There are also errors in word formation, such as 'exportations' instead of 'exports' and 'million of tons' instead of 'million tons'. To improve, study common collocations used in data description (e.g., 'a significant decline', 'reached a peak', 'fluctuated slightly') and ensure that nouns and verbs are used in their correct forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the clarity of the report. There are issues with sentence structure (e.g., 'Regarding Canada's figure... in 1985 demonstrated...'), missing articles, and incorrect preposition usage. The report relies heavily on simple sentence structures, and when complex structures are attempted, they often fail to be grammatically correct. To improve, practice using subordinate clauses to combine ideas and pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of prepositions when describing trends (e.g., 'increased to', 'fell by', 'stood at').

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