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Band 6+: The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams.

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The image shows a line graph with three categories from 1981 to 2007. Margarine: 1981 at 90, 1986 at 100, 1991 at 100, 1996 at 80, 2001 at 50, 2007 at 40. Low fat & reduced spreads: 1981 at 0, 1986 at 10, 1991 at 40, 1996 at 80, 2001 at 100, 2007 at 70. Butter: 1981 at 140, 1986 at 120, 1991 at 90, 1996 at 70, 2001 at 50, 2007 at 50.

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The line graph illustrates the level of consumption of spreads from the year 1981 to the year 200

Firstly, we notice that there is a downward trend in the consumption of butter throughout the years as they dramatically decrease from roughly 140 grams in 1981 to approximately 50 grams in 2007.

Secondly, the low fat and reduced spreads had peaked in 2001 reaching 80 grams to then fluctate until the year of 2007 reaching almost 70 grams.

Thirdly, for the margarine we notice a fluctating trend over the year as they do not surpass the interval between 80 grams and 100 grams.

To conclude, the level of consumption of these spreads have been changing over the years with the butter spead having a dramatic change and the low fat and reduced spreads having a surprising peak.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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spreads: 4

grams: 4

consumption: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the trends in the consumption of different spreads over the given period. However, there are some areas for improvement. The description of the low fat and reduced spreads is not entirely accurate, as it peaks at 100 grams in 2001, not 80 grams. Additionally, the report could benefit from more specific data points to support the descriptions of the trends. To improve, ensure accuracy in data reporting and provide more specific details to strengthen the analysis. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Using more precise language and transitions would enhance the flow. For example, instead of 'Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly', consider using more descriptive transitions that relate to the data. The conclusion is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the key trends or relationships between the spreads.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. Using more specific terms to describe trends (e.g., 'plummeted', 'gradually increased', 'remained relatively stable') would improve the report. The word 'fluctuate' is used repeatedly; try to find synonyms to add variety.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('the', 'a', 'an'). For example, 'the low fat and reduced spreads had peaked' could be improved. Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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