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The image contains a line graph titled 'Employment of Men and Women Aged 18-34 in Australia (1976 vs 2011)', plotting Percentage Employed against Age from 18 to 34. For Men in 1976, the percentages by age are: 18(56), 19(60), 20(63), 21(66), 22(67), 23(67), 24(66), 25(69), 26(69), 27(68), 28(67), 29(68), 30(73), 31(78), 32(80), 33(82), 34(87). For Men in 2011: 18(42), 19(46), 20(49), 21(52), 22(55), 23(56), 24(54), 25(53), 26(53), 27(52), 28(52), 29(55), 30(61), 31(63), 32(64), 33(68), 34(71). For Women in 1976: 18(52), 19(51), 20(50), 21(50), 22(49), 23(48), 24(45), 25(41), 26(40), 27(40), 28(39), 29(39), 30(38), 31(38), 32(37), 33(35), 34(34). For Women in 2011: 18(48), 19(43), 20(44), 21(44), 22(44), 23(45), 24(47), 25(47), 26(46), 27(43), 28(40), 29(39), 30(37), 31(36), 32(35), 33(34), 34(33).
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The line graph compares the percentage of men and women aged 18-34 who were employed in Australia in 1976 and 2011.
Overall, males consistently recorded the highest employment rate in both 1976 and 2011 as they increased with age, particularly in 1976, while the reverse was true for females which declined over time and age. Males employment peaked at the age of their early 30s, whereas females witnessed a sharp decline in this age.
Males showed an upward trend. In 1976, the figure for men grew noticeably from around 55% to 70% at the age of 25 and further to its peak of 80% at age 30. Similar, yet lower pattern was observed in 2011. Although only 42% of males aged 18 were employed in 2011, the figure increased significantly, reaching over 70% at the age of 34.
Females followed a downward trend. In 1976, female employment declined gradually from approximately 52% at age 18 to 40% by age 25 and sharper drop was seen at age 34, constituting 30%.
In 2011, the rate started at below 50%, before experiencing fluctuation at early 20. However, it fell sharply to 30% in the early 30s.
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