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The image presents a map showing 2 possible sites, S1 and S2, for a new super market in the town of GARLSDON, which has a population of 65,000. The legend defines different zones: Countryside, Town Centre (no traffic zone), Housing, and Industry, along with infrastructure including a Railway and Main roads. Site S1 is located in the countryside, while site S2 is in the Town Centre. Main roads connect Garlsdon to three other towns: Hindon, which is 12 km away and has a population of 10,000; Bransdon, 16 km away with a population of 15,000; and Cransdon, 25 km away with a population of 29,000.

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The map for town of Garlsdon shows that, they are planning to build two new super market s1 and s2. The plan for these new super market is absoluetly astonishing for the people of the town which can help for there day to day needs. Garlsdon stands with the population of 65000 peoples.The map shows that its been well planned with industrial areas at border of the town and housing spread over the town. The main center of the town is located at mainly at center.The S2 super market is located in town center with perfect spot where people from housing area can easily connect to the town center for buying the usual day to day stuff. It seems that S2 super market will be very helpfull for the peoples of the town.

The perfecly planned town also has the railway track coming from south west part of the town all the way to center and from center to north eastern part towards the countryside. By which peoples can travel from one side of the town to another easily.The S1 super market also has the great spot at countryside towards north east which can also help people to buy the stuff who are travelling by the train or who lives in countryside for there peacefully naturistic lifestyle.

The Garlsdon town has also the main roads which connect two cities Bransdon and Cansdon with population of 15,000 and 29,000 respectively where these people can also enjoy the super market via main roads.

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but includes some irrelevant and inaccurate information. The writing style is more descriptive than analytical, and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on comparing and contrasting the two sites, providing specific details about their locations and accessibility, and using more precise language. Also, ensure the information presented is accurate and relevant to the task.

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The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The ideas are not well-organized, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The introduction is vague and doesn't clearly state the purpose of the report. The body paragraphs jump between different aspects of the map without a clear focus. The conclusion is missing, leaving the report unfinished. To improve coherence and cohesion, use clear topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph, use transition words and phrases to connect ideas, and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the map.

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there is some inaccuracy in word choice. The language is not always appropriate for an academic report. To improve lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to maps, locations, and urban planning. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms for common words and phrases. Pay attention to the specific vocabulary used in academic writing and try to incorporate it into your report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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