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Band 4+: The map below shows 2 possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new super market planned for the town of GARLSDON.

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The image presents a map showing 2 possible sites, S1 and S2, for a new super market in the town of GARLSDON, which has a population of 65,000. The legend defines different zones: Countryside, Town Centre (no traffic zone), Housing, and Industry, along with infrastructure including a Railway and Main roads. Site S1 is located in the countryside, while site S2 is in the Town Centre. Main roads connect Garlsdon to three other towns: Hindon, which is 12 km away and has a population of 10,000; Bransdon, 16 km away with a population of 15,000; and Cransdon, 25 km away with a population of 29,000.

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Planning of a new supermarket for the town of Garlsdon is illustrated by two possible sites in the map below.

Overall, both the sites are been planned in the area where there is less or no traffic zone.

Site 1 is been planned in countryside. Housing and Industries near the site is more. The site is between Railway and a main road which is 12km to Hinden where the population is 10,000.

Site 2 is planned at town centre with no traffic zone. Three main roads and a railway line is passing through it. One of the main roads is Hinden. The other road is 16 km to Branson where the population is 15,000 and the other road is 25 km to Cranston where the population is 29,000.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the sites is somewhat general and lacks specific details. To improve, focus on providing more precise information about the location of each site in relation to key features and distances. Also, ensure accuracy in describing the connections between the sites and other towns. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The overview is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the key features of the map. The description of each site could be more structured and detailed. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the map.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the locations and features on the map. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to urban planning, infrastructure, and demographics. For example, instead of saying 'less or no traffic zone,' you could use terms like 'pedestrianized zone' or 'low-traffic area.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('is been planned'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is also quite simple and lacks complexity. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and practice using a variety of sentence structures to enhance clarity and accuracy.

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