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The image presents a map showing 2 possible sites, S1 and S2, for a new super market in the town of GARLSDON, which has a population of 65,000. The legend defines different zones: Countryside, Town Centre (no traffic zone), Housing, and Industry, along with infrastructure including a Railway and Main roads. Site S1 is located in the countryside, while site S2 is in the Town Centre. Main roads connect Garlsdon to three other towns: Hindon, which is 12 km away and has a population of 10,000; Bransdon, 16 km away with a population of 15,000; and Cransdon, 25 km away with a population of 29,000.

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The map illustrates two proposed locations for a new super market of Garlsdon town.

Overall, Garlsdon town, having a significant majority of people (around sixty five thousands) has planned for a new super market in S1 and S2 locations. S1 is located on the countryside area adjacent to the main roads where the transport facilities are available. While S2 lies on the town centre, (no traffic zone) inaccessible of transport services. Moreover, railway goes through the town centre.

S1 is 12 kilometres away from Hindon. So it would be easier for Hindon’s people to visit S1. While town centre is 16 kilometres far from Bransdon and 25 kilometres from cransdon. Though vehicles are not allowed in this area, train is easier to access. Moreover, town centre is grounded by greatly industry and little bit of residential zone in the north to south. So a lot of people can have access in this sites.

since, S1 lies on the countryside, huge amount of open place is there. Apart from this, it is adjacent to main roads and railway. So all types of vehicles are allowed here. While town centre has less open place due to industry and residence.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing both proposed sites and their locations relative to transport and surrounding areas. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: it incorrectly states that S2 is inaccessible by transport, while the visual description indicates it is in a no-traffic zone but has a railway. It also omits the population figures for the nearby towns and the distances for S1 (only mentions Hindon). The report includes some irrelevant details (e.g., 'significant majority of people') and has minor grammatical issues. To improve, ensure all key features are covered accurately and avoid overgeneralizations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by abrupt transitions and unclear referencing. For example, the phrase 'this sites' is vague, and the connection between ideas could be smoother. To improve, use cohesive devices more effectively (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Furthermore') and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic. Also, avoid informal phrasing like 'So' at the start of sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'proposed locations', 'adjacent to', and 'accessible'. However, there are inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'super market' should be 'supermarket', 'grounded by' is incorrect, 'little bit of' is informal). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary (e.g., 'situated', 'surrounded by', 'residential area') and avoid informal or vague expressions. Also, ensure correct spelling of place names (e.g., 'Cransdon').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'having a significant majority of people' is awkward, 'inaccessible of transport services' is incorrect, and 'since, S1 lies' has an unnecessary comma. Also, there are missing articles and incorrect plural forms (e.g., 'a new super market' should be 'a new supermarket', 'open place' should be 'open space'). To improve, review subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Proofreading for punctuation and grammar will enhance accuracy.

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