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Band 5+: The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image shows bookstore layouts from 2000 and a current version; in 2000, fiction sections occupy larger space on the left and right sides, travel is centrally located, new books are left of travel, service desk is bottom left, followed by non-fiction at the bottom; in the current layout, fiction is top right, travel is top center, new books are bottom left of travel, art is top left, followed by hobbies and cookery to the right of art, non-fiction is bottom right, the service desk remains bottom left alongside the addition of a cafe.

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The maps give information about the layout of a bookstore between two periods in 2000 and now. Overall, travel,new books and service desk remained unchanged between the given period. However, coming to the fiction zone, this structure was completely changed.

Regarding 2000, there were two big fiction area. Additionally, travel, new books and service were located in the left side of the bookstore. And there were three same-sized buildings art, hobbies and cookery. At the bottom of the map, non-fiction sructure was situated.

By observing alterations, travel,new books and service desk stayed unchanged. However, fiction area was divided into five buildings art, hobbies,cookery,small fiction and non-fiction. In the middle of the map, new tables were placed in the initial zone of art, hobbies and cookery buildings. Initial non-fiction area was changed to the big cafee. All in all, the location of bookstore’s enterance remained unchanged where the left side of the map.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

fiction: 4

books: 3

service: 3

unchanged: 3

buildings: 3

non-fiction: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the 2000 layout is somewhat vague and contains errors (e.g., stating that travel, new books, and service were on the left side, and mentioning 'three same-sized buildings' without clear reference). The current layout is described with some confusion, particularly regarding the placement of the cafe and the division of the fiction area. The report also incorrectly states that the entrance location remained unchanged, which is not mentioned in the visual description. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main features and making clear comparisons between the two periods, ensuring that all key changes (such as the addition of the cafe and the relocation of sections) are correctly identified.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs describing the two time periods. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'this structure was completely changed', 'the initial zone of art, hobbies and cookery buildings'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Regarding 2000', 'By observing alterations'). Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to separate the description of the past and present layouts more clearly. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing locations (e.g., 'located', 'situated', 'in the middle of', 'at the bottom of'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'sructure', 'cafee', 'enterance') and imprecise word choices (e.g., 'buildings' instead of 'sections' or 'areas', 'initial' instead of 'former' or 'previous'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of certain words (e.g., 'unchanged'). To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing changes and locations, and proofread for spelling accuracy.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are frequent grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('there were two big fiction area'), incorrect articles ('a bookstore between two periods in 2000 and now'), and awkward phrasing ('the location of bookstore's enterance remained unchanged where the left side of the map'). Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing commas after introductory phrases). To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Reviewing common grammar rules and proofreading can help enhance accuracy.

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