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Band 5+: The maps below show a coal mining site before and after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates two maps; first labeled "Before" with office, staff changing room, parking area, director board, car parking, entrance underground (for workers), waste tip 1, and waste tip 2; second labeled "After" with museum, parking area, cafe, entrance underground (for visitors), digging driving track, picnic area, children play area, and lottery park.

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The provided maps delineate the changes of a coal mining site past and present after reconstruction.

Overall, it is noticeable that, coal mining site was converted into residential area. Most of constructions have been undergone dramatic changes only parking lot and mine entrance remained still.

In terms of past, office and staff’s changing room were located next to parking and mine entrance for workers in the north side. There were lorry park which was specially for trucks and right beside it were two waste pits also a medical room situated in the center of area.

In terms of present, those office and changing room have been converted into one main museum for citizens and medical room has been changed to a cafe. Two waste pits have been cleared to make way to green space where picnic area and driving truck track placed. All facilities as well cafe in the green space have been surrounded by foot path and in the southeast corner children’s play ground has been built. In addition, parking lot and mine entrance have not experienced any transformation, despite this, it is now for visitors.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main changes between the two maps and making comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs for the past and present. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the overview incorrectly states the site was converted into a 'residential area' (it is a museum and leisure area), and some details like the 'lorry park' and 'medical room' are not mentioned in the visual description. Additionally, the phrase 'digging driving track' is misstated as 'driving truck track'. To improve, ensure the overview accurately reflects the main transformation (e.g., from industrial to recreational/cultural use) and verify all specific features against the visual information. Minor grammatical issues (e.g., 'past and present after reconstruction') could also be refined for clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to structure the information by comparing the 'before' and 'after' states, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'In terms of past' and 'In terms of present' could be more smoothly integrated. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, such as 'despite this' which is not correctly applied. To improve, focus on using a clear overall structure (e.g., one paragraph for the 'before' map and one for the 'after' map, with comparisons woven in) and ensure that each sentence logically follows from the previous one. Avoid overusing simple connectors like 'and' and 'also'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks the range and precision expected for a higher score. Words like 'delineate', 'converted', and 'undergone' show some attempt at variety, but there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'coal mining site past and present after reconstruction' and 'lorry park which was specially for trucks'. The term 'residential area' is also not accurate based on the description. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing changes (e.g., 'transformed into', 'replaced by', 'relocated') and locations (e.g., 'adjacent to', 'in the vicinity of'). Use more specific and natural collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward structures that significantly affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('a coal mining site past and present'), incorrect verb forms ('have been undergone'), and subject-verb agreement issues ('Most of constructions have been'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the correct use of tenses (past simple for the 'before' state, present simple for the 'after' state) and articles. Practice writing complex sentences with clear subjects and verbs, and proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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