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Band 4+: The maps below show a coal mining site before and after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates two maps; first labeled "Before" with office, staff changing room, parking area, director board, car parking, entrance underground (for workers), waste tip 1, and waste tip 2; second labeled "After" with museum, parking area, cafe, entrance underground (for visitors), digging driving track, picnic area, children play area, and lottery park.

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The maps illustrate a mining site past and present reconstruction

In general,Now biuld new areas such as cafe,children playground and picnic place.Also exchange office and changing room to museum.

There was director board in middle of map next to car parking area. East side of platform were two waste tips.Northern side was entrance underground for employees .Indeed in North-western part was the apartment within office,staff-changing room.At least in the corner was where placed parking area.

Now appears some new buildings in the central square . Car parking destroyed by workers to biuld wide Cafe which replaced with director board. In places next to Cafe construct digging driveway zone and picnic area.Office and changing room become to museum .Moreover underground entrance concerns about visitors than workers.So children play area lottery park appears in south of mining site where wide open for them

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Task Response

The report identifies some key changes but lacks overall clarity and organization. The language is quite basic and contains grammatical errors. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary related to map descriptions (e.g., 'northwest corner' instead of 'North-western part') and ensure correct grammar and sentence structure. Also, try to group information logically, perhaps by area of the site or type of change, to enhance coherence. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing, making it difficult to follow the changes and comparisons between the two maps. The writing jumps between different areas without clear transitions. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a logical flow. Consider organizing the report by area or feature to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and sometimes inaccurate ('biuld,' 'exchange,' 'construct'). There is a lack of precision in describing the changes. Expand your vocabulary related to site development and spatial relationships. Use more precise language to describe the transformations and locations of different features.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. Sentence structure needs significant improvement to enhance clarity. Focus on using correct verb tenses to indicate past and present states. Proofread carefully to eliminate basic grammatical errors.

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