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Band 7+: The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary

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The image shows Harton's map transformations from 2008 to 2016. In 2008, features included a derelict warehouse, an old town, woodland, a lake, an arts centre, a school, residential areas, and an industrial complex. By 2016, the derelict warehouse was replaced by a multi-screen cinema, woodland was partly converted to a car park, the lake transformed into a pond, a university added, offices built, a shopping centre emerged where the arts centre was, preserving the school, and the industrial complex expanded.

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The map displays the changes in Harton town in the year 2008 and how it looked in 2016.

Overall, it is evident that some old buildings were erected in favor of modern areas, such as offices and parking zones. Moreover, the lake was depleted and new factories were built.

To begin with, the Arts centre had been redesigned to provide cinema space by 2016 in the west of the town, while the residential area along the river in the western part had been rebuilt in order to accommodate citizens. The industrial complex in 2008 had not been as big as in 2016, when the residential area in the south was knocked down and the factories had been expanded.

As for the East of Harton, the lake had been dried out by 2016 and had become a little pond. The derelict houses and old town in the north of the town were demolished and new car park and offices had been constructed. Turning to northwest, the residential area in the corner had not experienced any significant changes.

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main changes in Harton between 2008 and 2016. It identifies key developments such as the transformation of the arts centre, expansion of the industrial complex, and changes to the lake and northern areas. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies. For example, the introduction of the university and the shopping centre are not mentioned. To improve, ensure all significant changes are included and accurately represented. Also, pay attention to the accuracy of details and ensure a balanced coverage of all areas.

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The report is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and overall structure. However, transitions between paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of information. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.

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The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and sophisticated language to describe the changes. For example, instead of saying 'knocked down,' you could use 'demolished' or 'razed.' Also, try to avoid repetitive word choices by using synonyms.

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The report exhibits a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. Pay closer attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Review the use of articles (a, an, the) to ensure they are used correctly throughout the report.

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