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Band 4+: The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary

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The image shows Harton's map transformations from 2008 to 2016. In 2008, features included a derelict warehouse, an old town, woodland, a lake, an arts centre, a school, residential areas, and an industrial complex. By 2016, the derelict warehouse was replaced by a multi-screen cinema, woodland was partly converted to a car park, the lake transformed into a pond, a university added, offices built, a shopping centre emerged where the arts centre was, preserving the school, and the industrial complex expanded.

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The maps displays the changes of the Harton between 2008 and 2016.

Overall, theres has a lots of changes between 2 years which are showing on the map. Mostly, the places are changed and some of there are getting narrow in changes places.

Firstly, in 2008 of the lake which was loctaed on the northern east of the woodland is getting smaller and change into pond in 2016. Rresidential area which is originally in the south of the map is dissapear in 2016 and industrial complex which is in the southern east was getting wide and taking the place. The old town became as half office and university in the north and northern west. In the north area the original derelict warehouses are changed as car park. Also the atr centre which is located in the west of the map had been change as multi-screen cinema. Residential area became shopping centre too.

However there has been changed a too much but some of the place did not change, such as residentail are in the northern west and th river which id center of the map.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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northern: 3

change: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some key changes in Harton between 2008 and 2016, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is somewhat clear, but the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately describing the changes, ensuring correct grammar and vocabulary, and providing a more comprehensive overview of all significant changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is vague and doesn't effectively summarize the main changes. The body paragraphs jump between different areas and features without a clear structure, making it difficult to follow the transformations. Improve coherence by grouping related changes together and using clear transition words to guide the reader. For example, discuss changes in the north, then the south, or group changes by type (e.g., recreational, industrial). Paragraphing needs improvement to separate distinct ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There's over-reliance on simple words like 'change' and 'get'. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the transformations more precisely. For example, instead of 'getting smaller,' use 'diminished' or 'shrunk.' Instead of 'change into,' use 'transformed into' or 'converted to.' Also, pay attention to correct word usage (e.g., 'located' instead of 'loctaed'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('maps displays'), subject-verb agreement issues ('theres has'), incorrect article usage ('the Harton'), and awkward sentence structures. There are also issues with prepositions ('in 2008 of the lake') and pluralization ('warehouses are changed as car park'). Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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