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Band 5+: The maps below show the developments that have taken place in Whitehawk Country Park between 1980 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two side-by-side maps titled 'Whitehawk Country Park, 1980-2020' comparing the area layout in '1980' and '2020'. The '1980' map includes 'bird sanctuary' in the northwest, a large central area labeled 'Kilmarve Forest', 'Whitehawk Hotel' on the eastern side of the forest north of 'Caoimhe River', and 'Waterdale Farm' located south of 'Caoimhe River' in the southeast. The '2020' map features 'bird sanctuary' in the northwest, adjacent to a 'visitor centre' to its east and a 'gift shop' to its south, a reduced area of 'Kilmarve Forest' in the west, an enlarged 'Whitehawk Hotel' complex with additional surrounding buildings and roads in the east, 'Caoimhe River' along the lower portion crossed by bridges, and 'Waterdale Farm' in the southeast south of 'Caoimhe River'.

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The map illustrates the evolution of Whitehawk Country Park from 1980 and 2020.

Overall, the park had undergone significant development during the period. There had now a new visitor centre and gift shop developed at the area of Kilarve Forest and the location of Whitehawk Hotel had changed slightly. While, the waterdale farm and bird sanctuary remain unchanged.

In 1980, a large proportion of the park was covered by Kilmarve forest and there was a bird sanctuary at northeast side of the park. A small area was allocated for the Whitehawk hotel on the western side of the forest and there was a river running beside it. There was a waterland farm on the south of the park.

In 2020, the park had changed with significant progress. The area of the Kilmarve forest had now reduced, and a new visitor centre and gift shop were designeated there. The location of the whitehawk hotel had changed and now located across the road, while the location of the bird sanctuary and waterdale farm remained unchanged.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall description of the changes, but it contains some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the bird sanctuary is described as being in the northeast, whereas it is actually in the northwest. The hotel's location change is mentioned but not clearly specified, and the addition of roads and bridges is not described. To improve, ensure that all main features are accurately reported and that comparisons are made more explicitly. Focus on precise location descriptions and include all significant developments.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and paragraphs for each time period. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and minor lapses in cohesion. For example, the phrase 'There had now a new visitor centre and gift shop developed' is grammatically incorrect and affects clarity. Additionally, the use of 'While' at the start of a sentence is not ideal for cohesion. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic and use a range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'furthermore') to link ideas smoothly. Also, avoid abrupt shifts between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to maps and changes (e.g., 'illustrates', 'undergone significant development', 'allocated', 'reduced'). However, there are several lexical inaccuracies and repetitions. For instance, 'waterland farm' should be 'Waterdale Farm', and 'designeated' is a misspelling of 'designated'. The phrase 'a small area was allocated' is good, but the report could benefit from a wider range of descriptive terms (e.g., 'expanded', 'relocated', 'converted'). To improve, use precise and varied vocabulary to describe changes and locations, and ensure correct spelling of proper nouns.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect accuracy and clarity. For example, 'from 1980 and 2020' should be 'from 1980 to 2020', 'There had now a new visitor centre' is incorrect (should be 'There is now a new visitor centre'), and 'were designeated' is a misspelling. Additionally, there are issues with subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. The report attempts to use a range of structures, but errors reduce the overall control. To improve, review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses and prepositions, and proofread to eliminate spelling mistakes. Using more complex sentence structures accurately would also enhance the score.

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