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Band 6+: The maps below show the developments that have taken place in Whitehawk Country Park between 1980 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two side-by-side maps titled 'Whitehawk Country Park, 1980-2020' comparing the area layout in '1980' and '2020'. The '1980' map includes 'bird sanctuary' in the northwest, a large central area labeled 'Kilmarve Forest', 'Whitehawk Hotel' on the eastern side of the forest north of 'Caoimhe River', and 'Waterdale Farm' located south of 'Caoimhe River' in the southeast. The '2020' map features 'bird sanctuary' in the northwest, adjacent to a 'visitor centre' to its east and a 'gift shop' to its south, a reduced area of 'Kilmarve Forest' in the west, an enlarged 'Whitehawk Hotel' complex with additional surrounding buildings and roads in the east, 'Caoimhe River' along the lower portion crossed by bridges, and 'Waterdale Farm' in the southeast south of 'Caoimhe River'.

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The maps compare the changes that occured in Whitehawk Counrty Park from 1980 to 2020.

Overall, the park now appears less natural with addition of new amenities. However, some of the landmarks stayed at their original location over the period of time. The park now has extensive road network with some house built near the Caoimhe river,

Notably, most of the Kilmarve forest has been cut down and shrinked into a small area at the west of map. The forest area at the north has been replaced with gift shops and visitor centre for people visiting the park. The Whitehawk hotel has been renovated and moved to the east.

Additionally, new road network has been built to easily reach the park from all directions. Newer buildings has been added in the eastern side along the Caoimhe river. However, some landmarks like bird sanctuary and Waterdale farm still remains at it’s original location.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main changes between 1980 and 2020, and includes an overall summary. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., 'shrinked' should be 'shrunk', 'it's' should be 'its') and minor omissions (e.g., the bridges over the river are not mentioned). The report could be improved by ensuring grammatical accuracy and including more specific comparisons, such as the addition of the visitor centre and gift shop, and the expansion of the hotel complex. Overall, the response covers the requirements of the task with some lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is occasionally disrupted by abrupt transitions and some unclear references. For example, the sentence 'The park now has extensive road network with some house built near the Caoimhe river' could be better integrated. The paragraphing is present but could be more skillfully managed to separate different types of changes more clearly. Using linking words and phrases more effectively would improve the logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'less natural with addition of new amenities'). However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions, such as 'shrinked' (should be 'shrunk') and 'has been cut down and shrinked'. The range of vocabulary is somewhat limited, and more precise terms could be used to describe changes (e.g., 'relocated' instead of 'moved'). Expanding the lexical range and ensuring correct word forms would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include 'occured' (should be 'occurred'), 'Counrty' (should be 'Country'), 'shrinked' (should be 'shrunk'), and subject-verb agreement issues like 'Newer buildings has been added' (should be 'have been added'). There is also a missing article in 'with addition of new amenities' (should be 'the addition'). While some complex structures are attempted, they are not always controlled accurately. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of sentence structures would significantly improve the score.

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