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Band 6+: The maps compare a present layout of the college and future developments to it

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The image displays two diagrams, a "PRESENT LAYOUT" and a "FUTURE LAYOUT". The "PRESENT LAYOUT" contains 1 administrative offices building, 1 car park, 1 sports fields area, 1 entrance, a central building with 10 teaching areas arranged in two columns of 5 separated by 1 corridor, 1 staff room, and 5 trees. The "FUTURE LAYOUT" contains 1 administrative offices building, 1 cafe, 1 library, 1 sports fields area, 1 sports hall, 2 entrances, the same central building with 10 teaching areas and 1 corridor, 1 staff room, and a new building with 3 labs (Lab 1, Lab 2, Lab 3) and 1 computer room separated by a second corridor.

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The provided maps show developments that have taken place in the college now and in the future. Overall, the college is projected to undergo major transformations such as expension the building, with the addition of new facilities and improvements.

Focusing on the left side of the layout first, the administrative offices will not see any changes, while the car park will be replaced by cafe and library. The sports field will be smaller to make a way for a sports hall. The main coridor is almost in the middle of the building and extends from north to south, this one will not change; however there will be constructed a new tracking area and the total number of areas – six. Additionally, the entrance that situated above the coridor will not transform, whereas a staff room below will be bigger.

Regarding the right side of the map, there will be the same transformation in the tracking areas, while trees will be demolished to make a way for the second larger coridor, three labs and a computer room.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the present and future layouts of the college. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as the mention of 'tracking areas' instead of 'teaching areas' and the incorrect number of areas. Additionally, the description of the car park being replaced by a cafe and library is not entirely accurate based on the visual description. The language is generally appropriate, but there are minor grammatical errors (e.g., 'expension' should be 'expansion', 'coridor' should be 'corridor'). To improve, ensure accurate use of terminology and verify details from the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure and attempts to organize information by comparing present and future layouts. However, there are some lapses in coherence, such as unclear references (e.g., 'the main coridor is almost in the middle of the building and extends from north to south, this one will not change') and awkward phrasing that disrupts flow. The paragraphing is present but could be more skillfully managed to improve clarity. To enhance coherence, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear aspect of the comparison and use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variety (e.g., 'transformations', 'demolished', 'facilities'). However, there are inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'expension' instead of 'expansion', 'tracking area' instead of 'teaching area', 'coridor' instead of 'corridor'). The lexical range is limited, and some phrases are not natural (e.g., 'make a way for'). To improve, focus on using precise and accurate vocabulary related to maps and developments, and proofread for spelling errors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('cafe and library' should be 'a cafe and a library'), incorrect verb forms ('will be constructed' is awkward), and run-on sentences ('the main coridor is almost in the middle of the building and extends from north to south, this one will not change'). There is some attempt to use a range of structures, but control is inconsistent. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures accurately, and pay attention to subject-verb agreement, articles, and punctuation.

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