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The image contains two maps of Grange Park, one depicting its layout in 1920 and another showing its layout today. The 1920 map shows two rose gardens located on either side of Arnold Avenue with seats next to each. A stage for musicians is positioned in the bottom left corner with a fountain nearby, and a pond for water plants in the top right corner. A glasshouse is situated at the bottom right corner, with entrances available from Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. The current map also depicts two entrances from the previously mentioned avenues, with the same rose garden next to the Arnold Avenue entrance. There is now a café adjacent to this rose garden, with a water feature nearby. At the bottom right corner, an amphitheater for concerts has replaced the glasshouse. Additionally, a Children's play area is present at the top right corner, near the pond that previously existed for water plants. An entrance to the underground is also shown in the bottom right corner.

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The two maps illustrate the significant transformations in the layout of a grange park between 1920 and its present-day design.

Overall, the grange park has seen extensive modernization and became more residential area, with new entertainment-focused facilities replacing older ones.

In 1920, the grange park had a simple layout with lots of green spaces such as Rose gardens and a pond for water plants. Rose gardens were located in three different parts of the park: northern, eastern, and western sides. Additionally, seats were placed in every corner, especially near the Rose gardens and main entrances, one to the Arnold avenue and second to the Eldon street. In the western part, there was a stage for musicians and it has taken place in front of the fountain that was located in the midst of the layout. The last striking feature is that there was a glasshouse, which stood at the southeastern tip of the area.

Today, the grange park has undergone noticeable development. Two separate Rose gardens, top right and bottom left, have been consolidated into a single central garden but one at the top left remains unchanged. The old fountain has been knocked down to make way for this new garden. The stage for musicians has been transformed into a large amphitheatre for concerts and take a place near the Rose garden in the north-west part. The glasshouse has been demolished to introduce a new water feature that reminds of an ornamental pond. The old pond for water plantation has been turned into children’s play area and next to this, where used to be the Rose garden, has been constructed a new café. Finally, there has been introduced an underground entrance in the east or the park.

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The report covers the requirements of the task, describing the changes to Grange Park between 1920 and the present day. There are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as misidentifying the locations of the rose gardens and water feature. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in describing the locations and changes within the park.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally organized, but the flow could be improved. The organization into paragraphs is acceptable, but the transitions between them could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, in the second paragraph, the phrase "Overall, the grange park has seen extensive modernization and became more residential area" is a bit abrupt. It would benefit from a clearer connection to the preceding sentence. In the third paragraph, the phrase "In 1920, the grange park had a simple layout with lots of green spaces such as Rose gardens and a pond for water plants" is a good start, but the subsequent sentences could be more logically ordered to enhance coherence. The fourth paragraph has similar issues with flow and logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise. For example, using 'transformations' and 'modernization' is appropriate, but some descriptions are less effective. Consider using more specific vocabulary related to park layouts and features. For example, instead of saying 'became more residential area', you could say 'incorporated more recreational facilities'. Also, the phrase 'it has taken place in front of' is not the most natural way to describe the location of the stage. Try to use more varied and precise vocabulary to describe locations and changes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a fair range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. For example, in the second paragraph, 'became more residential area' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'become more of a recreational area'. In the third paragraph, 'Rose gardens were located in three different parts of the park: northern, eastern, and western sides' is inaccurate based on the visual description, and the grammar is slightly awkward. The sentence 'Additionally, seats were placed in every corner, especially near the Rose gardens and main entrances, one to the Arnold avenue and second to the Eldon street' contains errors in sentence structure and agreement. In the fourth paragraph, 'Two separate Rose gardens, top right and bottom left, have been consolidated into a single central garden but one at the top left remains unchanged' is confusing and grammatically awkward. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy.

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