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Band 5+: The maps show a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevants.

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The image depicts two layouts of a site: the "present day" configuration includes a play area, noodle shop, cinemas, cafe, department store, supermarket, car park, fitness centre, golf course, and park, with an entrance; the "planned development" map features a beauty salon, shoe store, cosmetics store, gift shop, department store, info centre, fashion stores, supermarket, shoe store, car park, and entrance.

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The maps illustrates a shopping mall, as it is now, and planned for its development. Overall, the planned development almost changes all over the areas, particulary golf course and park have changed by department store.

As it is now, the shopping mall has one entrance in west-side. Step forward, surprisingly with cafe area, while in the south-side there are two entertainment (play area and cinemas) and one shop section. Opposite the building, there exists supermarket, toilet, and large area of department store. While, in outdoor car park and fitness centre can be found.

For planned development, many constructions are modyfied and expanding size of indoor. There are more exsits shops and also beauty section in south-side. The cafe area is occupied by info centre. Beside toilet exists with fashion stores, while department store is move to next place, which is golf course and park area previously. Adding one entrance in front of the department store, and expanded the car park in outdoor by cutting fitness centre.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

department: 4

planned: 3

development: 3

while: 3

there: 3

store: 3

centre: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of both maps and makes relevant comparisons. The organization is clear, with separate paragraphs for the current layout and the planned development. However, the language could be more precise and sophisticated, and there are some grammatical errors. To improve, focus on using more accurate vocabulary to describe the changes and ensure grammatical accuracy throughout the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt to organize the information, but the flow is frequently disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to better group related ideas. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs need significant work to enhance coherence. For example, the connection between the description of the current layout and the planned development is not always clear. Using more precise language and transitional phrases would help guide the reader through the information more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('exsits,' 'modyfied'). There is a lack of precision in describing the changes and features of the shopping mall. To improve, focus on using a wider range of vocabulary related to urban planning, retail spaces, and changes in layout. Synonyms and more specific terms would enhance the description and make it more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('maps illustrates'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. There are also issues with punctuation. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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