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Band 4+: The maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007.

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The image compares two maps of Pentland from 1950 and 2007, detailing sea, roads, industrial area, car park, grassland in 1950, and yacht marina, park, swimming pool, multi-story car park, apartments, many shops, cinema, houses in 2007.

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Two different maps illustrates the changes of coastal town, named Pentlandi between 1950 and 2007

Overall, the info structure of the city developed over 57 years in contrast there were no houses, cinema and swimming pools

In 1950 the info structure of the city was too sample like road on the middle of the map, which connects 4 horizons on the top of the map is located sea, on the right side of the road is car parking zone nearby south-east are grassland, by the left side of the road is located a industrial area.

After 57 years the roads change by added two roads which connects the sea, and sea renamed by yacht marine on the left side of the yacht marine is create a park, the industrial area is remained by swimming pool and multi story car park, while on the north-east over car park created apartments and shopping industries. On the west-south where nothing was build, the cinema industries come. On the grassland are which located on south-east build cottages

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The report addresses the task, but there are noticeable issues with organization, grammar, and vocabulary. The description of the changes is somewhat unclear and lacks specific details. To improve, focus on using more precise language, structuring the report into clear paragraphs with specific themes, and proofreading carefully for grammatical errors.

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The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of incorrect word choice and imprecise descriptions. Expand your vocabulary related to urban development and geographical features. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition. Pay attention to the specific vocabulary needed to describe changes in maps and diagrams.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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