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Band 6+: The office building where you work doesn't have any parking spaces available for employees. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain the problem - suggest a solution - say how on-site or nearby parking would benefit employees.

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding the unavailability of parking space for the employees.

Everyday, I have to find a new location for my car. As a result. I always reach late to the office, which really impacts my productivity. Although I always find parking space for my car, but yesterday, I was unable to find, which was really annoyed me.

I would like to suggest a new parking area that should be allocated to the employees, so that they can park their vehicles easily. Moreover, if possible, please install a shed too so that our vehicles do not get damaged by the sunlight or rain. Either you can provide on-site, or parking.

This will definitely provides benefits to the employees. First, they will start their work on time. Second, they no need to worry about their vehicles.

I hope you will consider my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Alex.

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The problem is clearly explained, a solution is offered, and the benefits are outlined. However, the explanation could be more detailed and impactful.

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The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraph structure. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall coherence.

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5.5

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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Band 6+: The office building where you work doesn't have any parking spaces available for employees. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain the problem - suggest a solution - say how on-site or nearby parking would benefit employees.

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