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Band 5+: The organizer of the annual festival is going to organize a festival in your place. Write a letter to the organizer giving feedback for last year and suggestions for this year. In your letter, you should: give your feedback for the last festival tell him/her what you can do for the new festival suggestions about the new festival.

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Dear sir/madem,

I am writing in connection with the yearly party which is going to be held in my hometown. I am thrilled with news . As last year we enjoyed a lot. However, I would like to give some advice about the party. Last year there were some problems arisen.

Well, in the previous party everyone was happy. I also think that organizing a party help to meet with each other. Last year, There were no availability of DJ because of that all folks got bored. Moreover, There was only self service due to this , people had to wait on the queue to get there food.

Perhaps it would be beneficial if you would arrange some caters to serve the food to the guests. With this , people would be able to get their food without wasting their lot of time . Could you please bring DJ as well so that we all can dance there.

I hope all information would be beneficial for you to arrange a festival . I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Paaa

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would: 5

party: 4

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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and insightful.

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The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear connections between ideas. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would improve the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Significant improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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