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Band 6+: The percentage of internet users who shopped online in Australia by age group 2007-2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows internet users who shopped online in Australia by age group for the years 2007 and 2009, with data as follows: Age group 15-25: 2007 at 20%, 2009 at 30%; Age group 26-35: 2007 at 30%, 2009 at 40%; Age group 36-45: 2007 at 35%, 2009 at 45%; Age group 46-55: 2007 at 25%, 2009 at 40%; Age group 56-65: 2007 at 15%, 2009 at 20%; Age group 65+: 2007 at 5%, 2009 at 10%.

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The bar chart compares internet users who shopped online in Australia by age group.

Overall, the percentage of active accounts of three: 15-25; 26-35; 36-45 is higher than the other three. The data suggest that online shopping is becoming popular in Australia particularly among older age groups.

Specifically, in 2007, the 26-35 age group was the highest consumer with more than 30%, followed by the figure of 36-45 with about 26%. The age group 46-55 was higher than that of 15-25, which was double 56-65 and four times higher than the 65+ age group with approximately 5%.

According to 2009 data, the age group 36-45 reported a dramatic increase compared to 2007. The percentage of the 65+ age group was the lowest, similar to the group of 56-65 in 2007. In addition, this age group had the smallest number of active accounts to buy in online shopping during the 2007-2009 period. The percentage of 46-55 is twice as high 65+ which secured the third position from 2007 to 2009.

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The report provides a good overview of the data, but it could be more detailed and accurate in some areas.

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