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Band 4+: The pie chart and the line graph shows the workforce and the unemployment in Australia from 1996 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. (Mixed Charts)

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The image shows two visual data summaries: a pie chart and a line graph. Left: pie chart "Workforce in Australia by place of birth (2003)": Born in Australia 76%, NESC 14%, and ESC 10%. Right: line graph "Unemployment in Australia by place of birth (1993-2003)": Year-by-year data (percentage of group): 1993: Australia 9%, ESC 7%, NESC 15%; 1995: Australia 8%, ESC 6%, NESC 13%; 1997: Australia 7%, ESC 6%, NESC 11%; 1999: Australia 6%, ESC 5%, NESC 9%; 2001: Australia 6%, ESC 4.5%, NESC 7%; 2003: Australia 6%, ESC 4%, NESC 7%.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of labor in Australia by place of birth in 2003, while the line graph compares the proportion of unemployment by these in Australia between 1993 and 2003

It is clear that the figure for workforce born in Australia made up the biggest data, whereas people in ESC group was lowest. Additionally, the data of unemployment in Australia tended to decrease over the period.

Looking at the pie chart in more detail, the rate of labor born in Australia accounted for 76% out of a total, was higher than 66% compared to the number of people in ESC group just 10%. At 14% with the figure for workforce in NESC group.

Regarding to the line chart, the data of unemployment by birth’s place in ESC group stood at around 7%, before a significant plung to about 4% in 1997 and consecutive fluctuation to approximately 2.5% by the end. Meanwhile, although the percentage of unemployment by place of birth in Australia and NESC group same at roughly 2.3% in 1995, the figure for those still experienced a noticable decline to 2% and 1.5% respectively.

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australia: 6

unemployment: 4

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place: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies in data reporting and several structural issues. While the overview identifies general trends, the body paragraphs contain mathematical errors and misinterpretations of the visual data (for example, stating that the Australian workforce was 'higher than 66% compared to' the ESC group, and reporting unemployment figures like 2.5% or 1.5% which do not align with the provided data). Additionally, the report refers to the pie chart as a 'bar chart' in the introduction. To improve, ensure that all numerical data is reported accurately according to the visual provided and focus on using precise comparative language to describe the relationships between the different groups.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is hindered by poor sentence structure. While you have attempted to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Additionally', 'Regarding to', 'Meanwhile'), they are often used in sentences that are grammatically incomplete or fragmented. To improve, ensure that each paragraph contains full, logically connected sentences. Avoid using 'At 14%...' as a standalone sentence; instead, integrate it into the previous sentence to maintain flow.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'illustrates', 'accounted for', 'plunge'), but there are frequent inaccuracies in word choice and collocation. For example, 'made up the biggest data' and 'unemployment by these' are unnatural. You also misidentified the pie chart as a 'bar chart' in the introduction. Focus on learning precise collocations for data description, such as 'accounted for a significant proportion' or 'represented the largest share', rather than using 'data' as a countable noun for percentages.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of your report. There are several issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'people... was lowest'), sentence fragments (sentences lacking a main verb), and incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'Regarding to'). Additionally, the comparison structures are often broken or confusing. To improve, practice writing complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions (e.g., 'while', 'whereas', 'although') and ensure that every sentence has a clear subject and a finite verb.

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