Pie Chart

Band 6+: The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows a pie chart of global smartphone market share for 2023, detailing Apple at 30.0%, Samsung at 23.0%, Xiaomi at 20.0%, Oppo at 15.0%, and OnePlus at 12.0%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The illustration below presents data on the percentage of global smartphone sales by specific brands in 2023. The companies featured are Apple, with 30% of the market, followed by Samsung at 25%, Xiaomi at 20%, and Oppo and OnePlus, each holding less than 20% market share.

Overall, it can be easily seen that Apple is the most popular electronic device creator in the whole world market, with a significant amount of sales, while OnePlus is the least common.

Almost half of the pie chart is covered by Samsung and Xiaomi, whose combined portion of phone sales is more than 40% and logicaly they both are at second place after Apple. The brand named Oppo is not in the lowest position of the chart, however was still at a minority proportion with only 15% of market share.

Any of the telephone sales and manufacturing representatives shown in the picture has a majority, but Apple, with any of the second-placed brands together, will overtake 50%.

Word Count: 163

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sales: 4

apple: 4

market: 4

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report covers the main features of the pie chart, providing relevant data on the market share of different smartphone brands. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., Samsung's market share is stated as 25% instead of 23%). To improve, ensure data accuracy and vary sentence structure for better readability. Also, avoid stating the obvious.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of information could be improved. The 'overall' paragraph is a bit disconnected from the preceding description. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a smoother transition between sentences and paragraphs. For instance, you could start the second paragraph by directly comparing Apple's market share to the others mentioned earlier. Also, avoid abrupt shifts in focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate, but there's room for more precision and variety. For example, instead of 'significant amount of sales,' you could use 'substantial market share.' Also, the phrase 'electronic device creator' is a bit broad; 'smartphone vendor' or 'manufacturer' would be more accurate. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to market share and sales figures.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'logicaly they both are at second place after Apple' should be 'logically, they are both in second place after Apple.' Also, 'Any of the telephone sales and manufacturing representatives shown in the picture has a majority' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully is essential.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

Overall, Apple held the largest market share, followed by Samsung, while OnePlus accounted for the smallest proportion of sales. Apple dominated the global smartphone market in 2023, with its share reaching 30.0%. Samsung secured the second position, accounting for 23.0% of sales. Xiaomi followed closely, representing 20.0% of the market. Oppo captured 15.0% of the […]

Band 7+

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie chart gives information about the percentage of sales of mobile phone brands in the world in the period of 2023. Overall, Apple company had become the market leader during the period given. Whereas OnePlus had the lowest share among other tech companies. Looking into more details, Apple had had the largest revenue, which […]

Band 5+

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie chart provides information on sales by brand of worldwide smartphone division in the year 2023. Overall, Apple made up the biggest part of the pie chart, followed by Samsung smartphones, in the specified year. In contrast, Oppo and OnePlus smartphone sales showed the lowest indicators compared to other brand’s sales. Apple smartphone sales […]

Band 7+

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie-chart provide information on sellings by brand of worldwide smartphone’s division in year 2023. Overall, Apple made up the biggest part of pie-chart with Samsung smartphones in the specified year. İn contrast Oppo and Oneplus smartphone’s sales showed the lawest indicators compared to other brand’s sellings. Apple smartphone’s sales accounted 30 % for international […]

Band 4+

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of global smartphone sales by brands, namely Samsung, Apple, Oneplus, Oppo, and Xiaomi in 2023. Overall, it is evident that apple brand accounted for the greatest share of the total, whereas oneplus represented only a minimal proportion. The remaining brands occupied moderate percentages, with noticeable disparities between the dominant […]

Band 7+

See All

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate in

The pie charts compare the proportions of boys and girls who participate in a range of cultural and leisure activities. Overall, the two genders display markedly different preferences: boys are more inclined towards computer games and sports, whereas girls favour dancing and reading. Listening to music is the only activity that attracts an identical proportion […]

Band 9

The charts below show the main reasons why students choose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

The pie charts compare the main factors why students choose a particular university in the UK between 1997 and 2007. Overall, suitable degree courses, quality resources and quality of teaching increased by a small amount whereas proximity to parental home changed substantially and good sports and social activities fell down. Over the decade, the most […]

Band 6+

The pie chart below shows where one country's electricity came from in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrates the electricity of one country derived from different sources – hydro, coal,gas, nuclear, and wind & solar in 2022. Overall, coal accounted for the main energy source in that country , while the reverse was true for hydro power. Additionally, coal itself had bigger number than the product of the proportions […]

Band 7+

The charts below show the main reasons why students choose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

Band 6+

The charts below show the percentages of the water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.

The pie charts compare the distribution of water consumption across five different sectors in Sydney, Australia, during two years: 1997 and 2007. Overall, it is clear that the food industry accounted for the largest proportion of water usage in both years, despite experiencing a decrease. In contrast, water consumption increased in the service industry and […]

Band 8+

See All

Band 6+: The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

The pie chart below shows the distribution of global smartphone sales by brand in 2023.

Other Topics:

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate in

The charts below show the main reasons why students choose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

The pie chart below shows where one country's electricity came from in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the main reasons why students choose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

The charts below show the percentages of the water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (nguồn ielts-exam.net).

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium