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Band 5+: The pie chart illustrates the amount of graduates in nursing destination in the UK in 2009. While the table compares the various occupations held by these graduates within the health sector.

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The image shows that in 2009, 84% of nursing graduates in the UK worked in the health sector, 8% pursued further study, 4% combined work and study, 2% were unemployed, and 2% did other activities; within the health sector, 72.9% were hospital nurses, 12.4% midwives, 0.4% mental nurses, 10.3% community nurses, 1.3% paramedics, and 2.7% other roles.

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The diagrams illustrate data about what nurses who graduated from university did in the UK in 2009.

Overall, it is evident that most of graduated start their career in health sector as a nurse in hospital. While the least student chose further study and other career.

Regarding the destination figures, most of the student started their job after finishing their university in health sector with an 84%, while just 2% chose further study. 8% student started their job beside further study and just 4% being unemployment after university.

When it comes to working in health care, we can see that the majority of students prefer to work as a nurse in hospital with 79%, by contrast just 0.4% of students join to psychology hospital as a mental nurse. The second popular career was midwives that 12.4% select it. Community nurse achieved the Tirth rate with a 10.3%. Other job and paramedic were 2.7 and 1.3 respectively.

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Band 5+: The pie chart illustrates the amount of graduates in nursing destination in the UK in 2009. While the table compares the various occupations held by these graduates within the health sector.

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The pie chart illustrates the amount of graduates in nursing destination in the UK in 2009. While the table compares the various occupations held by these graduates within the health sector.

The pie chart illustrates the amount of graduates in nursing destination in the UK in 2009. While the table compares the various occupations held by these graduates within the health sector.

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