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Band 6+: The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. the table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparations where relevant.

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The image displays a pie chart and a table; the pie chart illustrates online language populations amounting to a total of 629 million as of December 2001, with English at 43%, Japanese at 9.6%, Chinese at 8.9%, German at 6.8%, Korean at 4.6%, Italian at 4.3%, Spanish at 4.1%, French at 3.3%, Portuguese at 2.6%, Dutch at 2.1%, and Other languages constituting 10.3%; the table lists average number of people online per specified date, with August 2001 having 513 million individuals representing 8.4% of world population, August 2000 at 368 million with 6%, August 1999 at 195 million with 4.6%, September 1998 at 139 million with 3.4%, and November 1997 at 76 million with 1.8%.

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The graph and the table illustrate the figure for people who were utilizing diverse languages online and avarage portion of people online from 1997 to 2001.

Overall, it is evidence that the most popular language was English, while the least was Dutch. Moreover, the figure for the avarage of people using online significantly increased from the initial year to the last year given.

To begin with the pie chart, 43% of English was the highest population in 2001. Looking at the other languages, the total percentage of languages of Japanese, Chinese and German at 25% is almost the same as the total of languages such as Spanish, Korean, Itarian, Portgees, French and Dutch.

Moving on to the table shown, the avarage number of people using online at 76 millions on November in 1997 gradually increased over the four years and reached at 513 millions on August in 2001. As well as the world population, the figure marked at 1.8% in the initial year, after which the number inclined at 8.4% in the last year.

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people: 4

languages: 4

online: 4

figure: 3

avarage: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main points of the task, providing a general overview of the data presented in both the pie chart and the table. The organization is clear, with an introduction, body paragraphs for each visual, and an overall statement. To improve, consider including more specific data comparisons and details, and ensure accuracy in reporting the data. Also, pay attention to grammar and vocabulary to enhance clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, but there are some areas where the flow could be improved. The organization into paragraphs is logical, but the transitions between sentences within paragraphs could be smoother. For example, in the third paragraph, the connection between the first and second sentences could be clearer. Consider using transition words or phrases to link ideas more explicitly. Also, ensure that each sentence contributes directly to the main point of the paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Some phrases are a bit repetitive (e.g., 'the figure for'). Try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to data analysis and trends. For instance, instead of 'the figure for people,' you could use 'the number of internet users' or 'the online population.' Also, be careful with spelling ('Itarian,' 'Portgees').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common issues include incorrect verb tense ('was utilizing' should be 'used'), subject-verb agreement ('millions' requires a plural verb), and article usage ('the avarage' should be 'the average'). There are also some awkward phrasings, such as 'the total percentage of languages of Japanese, Chinese and German at 25% is almost the same as the total of languages such as Spanish, Korean, Itarian, Portgees, French and Dutch.' This sentence could be restructured for better clarity and conciseness. Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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