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Band 4+: The pie charts below show information about where coffee is produced, consumed & where its profit goes.

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The image contains three pie charts labeled "PRODUCED," "CONSUMED," and "PROFIT GOES." The "PRODUCED" chart shows South America 44%, Asia 18%, Africa 19%, Central America 17%, Oceania 2%. The "CONSUMED" chart shows Europe 55%, Japan 7%, North America 11%, Other 27%. The "PROFIT GOES" chart presents Shipper 55%, Seller 25%, Producer 10%, Explorer 10%.

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The given charts present a comparative analysis of the place where coffee is manufactured, used, and distributed to generate profit.

From a data-wide standpoint, it can be seen that South Africa accounted for the biggest percentage in the total production of coffee, whereas Europe and delivery sector come first in consumption and earning profit from coffee at 41% and more than half.

The highest percentage was recorded for coffee production in South Africa at 45%. In contrast, Vietnam makes up only more than a fifth. Meanwhile, Indonesia recorded the second highest figure in produce coffee at 22% and the second least production ratio recorded in Japan at 18%. Regarding consumption, in particularly Europeans consumed the highest amount of coffee by contrast Japanese were least consuming the coffee. Consumtion coffee in American accounted for a large proporation, at 39% and 12% consumed in the rest of the world.

Finally, 51% of the profit from coffee is taken up by the delivery category, while both producers and exporters categories are under less than a fifth. Retailers is the second highest profit maker at 24%.

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coffee: 9

highest: 4

production: 3

profit: 3

recorded: 3

second: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies regarding the data provided in the visual description. There is a frequent mismatch between the categories mentioned in the report (e.g., South Africa, Vietnam, Indonesia, Japan as a producer) and the actual data provided in the charts (e.g., South America, Asia, Africa, etc.). Additionally, the report confuses the categories of the three different charts, making the overview and the body paragraphs difficult to follow. To improve, ensure that you strictly adhere to the labels and data points provided in the visual information and focus on accurately grouping the information by the specific charts provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report struggles with logical organization and clarity. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Meanwhile', 'Finally'), they are often used incorrectly or in ways that disrupt the flow. The progression of ideas is sometimes difficult to follow because the relationships between the sentences are not always clear. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between sentences logically support the comparison being made.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains several inaccuracies. There are instances of word choice errors (e.g., 'manufactured' instead of 'produced', 'delivery sector' instead of 'shipper') and spelling mistakes (e.g., 'Consumtion', 'proporation'). Additionally, some phrasing is unnatural. Aim to use a wider range of precise synonyms for 'production', 'consumption', and 'profit' and ensure that the terms used align strictly with the labels provided in the charts.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Retailers is'), article usage, and sentence structure (e.g., 'Japanese were least consuming the coffee'). Some sentences are awkwardly constructed, making them hard to parse. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures and ensuring that complex sentences are used accurately to describe trends and comparisons.

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