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Band 6+: The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

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The image includes two pie charts depicting online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand for the years 2003 and 2013 with data categorized as travel, film/music, books, and clothes. In 2003, travel constituted 36%, film/music 24%, books 21%, and clothes 19% of online sales. By 2013, travel expanded to 33%, clothes increased to 29%, while books decreased to 22%, and film/music dropped to 16%.
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The Pie Charts compare the sale that done from online in retail sectors in New Zealand in the years of 2003 and 2023.

Overall, highest sales have happened for travel in 2003, while highest proportion accounted for film and music industry in 2013.

In 2003, it is clear that 36% of total sales were happened, which was the major online business of the Year, however in 2013, a drop of 7% resulted in the same sector, which became the second biggest percentage of total online sales. The second and third major sector in 2003 was clothes and films as well as music, which accounted for 24% and 21% respectively. The decrease of 8% and increase of 12% can be seen in those two sectors by 2013.

Small proportion of the overall online business was for books in 2003 however, it has grew up of 3% into 2013 which was the second lawer sales ratio (22%).

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
online: 4
sales: 4
which: 4
second: 3
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Task Response

7
The report addresses the task by comparing the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Some minor inaccuracies and omissions are present, such as mentioning 2023 instead of 2013.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5
The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically presented. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and a few awkward phrasings that slightly affect the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

5.5
There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and awkward word choices are present. The report could benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5
A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward constructions throughout the report. More attention to grammar accuracy is needed.

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