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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the rates of energy production in Germany and Japan in 1990 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains four pie charts depicting energy sources by percentage for Germany and Japan in 1990 and 2000. In Germany 1990: Coal 40%, Oil 13%, Natural Gas 3%, Solar Power 3%, Wind Energy 7%, Biomass 10%, Hydropower 17%. In Germany 2000: Coal 29%, Oil 6%, Natural Gas 12%, Solar Power 23%, Wind Energy 17%, Biomass 13%, Hydropower 0%. In Japan 1990: Coal 39%, Oil 21%, Natural Gas 7%, Solar Power 6%, Wind Energy 9%, Biomass 4%, Hydropower 14%. In Japan 2000: Coal 23%, Oil 9%, Natural Gas 11%, Solar Power 27%, Wind Energy 21%, Biomass 8%, Hydropower 10%.

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The pie charts present data on the amount of electric production generated by different sources in Germany, measured in unit.

Regarding Germany, coal was among the most primary power source, accounting for 60 units in the year 1990, followed by hydro power and oil with 25 and 20 units, respectively. The remaining energy sources made up only a minimal amount of electricity, ranging from 15 to 5 units. By 2010, an opposite trend was observed in the distribution of these sources with the figure for solar was 11 times as high as in 1990, making it the most dominant producer, while in terms of coal, constituted only 45 units and ranked second after all. In addition, biomass and natural gas notably shared an equal increased units, whereas hydro remained unchanged in both examined years.

Turning to Japan, coal similarly dominated other sources with only 5 units lower than that in Germany in 1990, while the figures for renewable ones, except for hydro, were much lower, ranging from only 12 to 5 units.

Overall, while the use of renewable energy sources increased, there was a decrease in energy production from fossil fuels. Additionally, the gap between energy output rates in the two years narrowed significantly compared to the previous ten years.

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The units are mentioned without context, and the values provided do not align with the percentages in the pie charts. Key points are inaccurate and inappropriate, which detracts from the overall task achievement. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the pie charts, using percentages correctly, and making relevant comparisons between the countries and time periods. Ensure that the main features and trends are clearly identified and supported by the data.

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The report demonstrates an adequate level of coherence and cohesion. The organization is generally clear, with an attempt to group information logically. However, the flow could be improved by using more effective transition words and phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. The final paragraph feels somewhat disconnected from the preceding analysis and introduces a point about narrowing gaps that isn't clearly supported by the data presented. Consider focusing each paragraph on a specific aspect of the data and ensuring a smooth transition between them.

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The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are opportunities to enhance the precision and sophistication of word choices. For instance, using more specific terms related to energy production could improve the analysis. While the vocabulary is generally accurate, some phrases are a bit awkward or could be expressed more naturally. Expanding the range of vocabulary and focusing on more precise language would elevate the quality of the report.

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The report demonstrates a fair command of grammar, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. Sentence structures are generally simple, and while this contributes to clarity in some instances, it also limits the complexity of the analysis. There are instances of incorrect word usage and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and carefully proofreading for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

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