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Band 4+: The pie charts below show the share of Oscar winners by film genre in 2003 and 2008.

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The image shows two pie charts comparing the share of Oscar winners by film genre for 2003 and 2008. In 2003, Thriller had 42%, Documentaries 13%, Romance 12%, Science Fiction 10%, Action 15%, Comedy 3%, and Horror 7%. In 2008, Thriller had 35%, Documentaries 17%, Romance 20%, Science Fiction 11%, Action 12%, Comedy 3%, and Horror 10%.

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The illustration give information about each film genre (romance, comedy, thiller, horror, action, science fiction and documentary) winners of Oscar between 2003 and 2008.

Overall, thriller got the highest percentage from each year as opposed to comedy that only got stable in 3% winning from 2003 to 2008.

In 2003, most of the pie leads by thriller genre with 42%, continue with documentary in 13% and romance that closed to documentary genre in 12%. Furthermore, sience fiction only got 10% and 3 other got under 10% proportion (Action, Horror, and Comedy).

5 Years later, the order of percentage in each genre still same with 2003. Thriller still lead in 35%,documentary 17%, while romance and action got the same proportion in 12% winning and the lowest data still comedy with only 3% winning.

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genre: 4

comedy: 3

thriller: 3

winning: 3

still: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the data but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the 2008 data is not entirely accurate, particularly regarding the percentages for romance and action. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately represented and compared, and avoid generalizations that oversimplify the information. Also, the writing could be more precise and avoid informal language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. Transitions between sentences and ideas could be improved to enhance coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related information. Consider using cohesive devices more strategically to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While the report conveys the main points, using more specific and descriptive language could enhance the impact. For example, instead of 'got the highest percentage,' consider using phrases like 'accounted for the largest share' or 'dominated the winners.' Also, be careful with spelling ('thiller' should be 'thriller', 'sience' should be 'science').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often simple and could benefit from more complexity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'the illustration give information' should be 'the illustration gives information,' and '3 other got under 10% proportion' is grammatically awkward. Proofreading carefully is essential.

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