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Band 5+: The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

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The image contains four pie charts representing electricity generation in Germany and France for the year 2009. Germany's total electricity generation was 560 billion kWh, with conventional thermal accounting for 59.6%, nuclear for 23.0%, and renewables for 17.4%. Within renewables, biomass was 39.3%, wind 36.9%, hydroelectric 17.7%, and solar 6.1%, with geothermal at 0.0%. France generated 510 billion kWh, with nuclear at 76.0% and renewables at 13.7%. Within renewables, hydroelectric was 80.5%, wind 10.5%, solar 0.9%, and geothermal 0.0%.

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This report will describe two pie charts showing the electricity usage in France and Germany in various sources in 2009.

At first glance, it becomes clear that Germany generated more electricity than France, mostly on conventional thermal, while it was mostly nuclear type for France.

Germany shared only 17.4% on renewable type of electricity and a large number (approximately 60%) on conventional thermal source, while this number was about five times less in France foe conventional thermal and 13.7% for renewable type of generation.France mostly gained electricity from nuclear source, with 76%, while it was merely 23% in Germany.

Biomass and wind energy had the most percentages in renewable type of source in Germany, with 39.3% and 36.9%, respectively. However, France generated more power from hydroelectric with nearly 80% and a negligible percentage for the three other sources.

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The report provides a general overview of the information presented in the pie charts regarding electricity generation in Germany and France in 2009. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the description of the data, such as not mentioning the total electricity generated in each country, incorrect percentages, and missing details about solar and geothermal energy in France. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure and logical progression of ideas. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of information, which could be improved for better clarity and organization.

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The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and attempts to describe the data using varied language. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and expression, and a few awkward phrases that could be revised for better precision and clarity.

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There is a variety of sentence structures used in the report, showcasing some flexibility. However, there are several grammatical errors, especially in subject-verb agreement, prepositions, and word form, which affect the overall accuracy of the writing.

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