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Band 6+: The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (IELTS Cambridge 14 Map)

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The image depicts two diagrams of Grange Park. In 1920, the park showed several entrances on Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street, two rose gardens, a pond for water plants in the top right, a glasshouse on the right, a fountain centrally located, and a stage for musicians on the left. Today, the park features entrances at the same locations, an amphitheater for concerts replacing the stage, a central rose garden in place of the fountain, a café on the top right instead of the pond, a children's play area replacing the glasshouse, a water feature at the center right, and an entrance to an underground car park on the bottom right corner.

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The given layout depicts Grange park where is on Arnold Avenue that has been redeveloped since 1920.

In terms of all redevelopment, it is clear that Grange park has undergone many significant transformations over the period, it has made into more modern and developed. Some facilities have built to provide individuals’ recreation and prosperity.

In 1920, the fountain was the center of the park where was the main attraction for visitors, but after modernization has been replaced by the rose garden with seats around it. In the left side, there was a stage for musician that has been romoved. In the left side of the Rose garden, an amphitheatre has been established for concerts.

After modernization, in the upper corner of the park, a play area has been constructed for children. Additionally, cafe has been built for individuals to relax. Then, car park entrance has been placed in the downer corner side of the park in underground. Then, all seats around sides of the park have been removed.

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Task Response

The report accurately describes the main changes to Grange Park. Minor details are omitted, but the overall summary is effective.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's structure is generally clear, but some sentences lack smooth transitions, impacting the flow. Paragraphing could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

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The vocabulary used is adequate, with some good choices. More sophisticated language could enhance the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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Several grammatical errors and inaccuracies affect the overall coherence and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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Band 6+: The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (IELTS Cambridge 14 Map)

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