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Band 6+: The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two maps of Grange Park, one from 1920 and one from present day, with various features labeled. The 1920 map includes rose gardens in four locations, seats in three locations, an entrance, a stage for musicians, a fountain, a glasshouse, and a pond for water plants. The present day map includes rose gardens in two locations, seats in two locations, an entrance, an amphitheater for concerts, a cafe, a children's play area, a water feature, and an entrance leading to an underground car park. There are no numerical data points or percentages visible in the image.

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The maps illustrates the initial and altered layouts of public park in 1920 and today. Overall, Grange park witnessed a great deal of changes during this period. Some new constructions such as children’s play area, cafe, theatre for concerts have been introduced.

In 1920, the facility had two entraces in the middle of upper and lower side of the building, one next to Arnold avenue and the second to Eldon street respectively. Right next to north entry point there was located rose garden, while there was glasshouse near to south entrance. Fountain was situated in the centre of the park and stage for musicians in the left side of it. In the north east of the building was pond for water plants, while seating places and rose gardens were all over the park.

However, now there are some new changes happened in this area. Firstly, stage for musicians has been replaced by amphtheatre for concerts, and glasshouse by water feature. Additionally, the area for pound for water plans turned into children’s playground, while in the centre of the park there is one main rose garden surrounded by seats. Furthermore cafe has been added right next to children’s playing area.

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The report provides a clear overview and describes the main changes between the two maps. It covers the key features such as the replacement of the stage with an amphitheater, the glasshouse with a water feature, and the pond with a children's play area, as well as the addition of a cafe. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the number of entrances and the exact locations of some features. The report could be improved by more precise descriptions and ensuring all details are accurately reported. Overall, the task is well addressed with a logical structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs for each time period. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the building' instead of 'the park'). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some sentences are long and run-on, which affects the flow. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. Work on making the description more concise and logically connected.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'initial and altered layouts', 'new constructions'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'entraces', 'amphtheatre', 'pound') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'the building' instead of 'the park', 'all over the park' instead of 'throughout the park'). To improve, expand your range of location vocabulary and use more precise terms for describing changes (e.g., 'replaced by', 'converted into'). Proofread to eliminate spelling mistakes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts a range of sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Issues include subject-verb agreement ('The maps illustrates'), incorrect verb forms ('there was located'), and incorrect use of articles and prepositions ('the initial and altered layouts of public park'). There are also run-on sentences and missing punctuation. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and using a variety of complex sentences with accurate punctuation. Review grammar rules for articles and prepositions.

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