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Band 5+: The sports center that you regularly visit has a problem with some of its equipment. Write a letter to the center manager. In your letter tell them about the problem; describe how it has affected you; explain why it should be fixed soon.

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Dear manager,

I am writting this letter to inform you regarding broken sports equipments and other facility in Akshar sports centre.

First of all, I am a loyal member of your sports centre since 2020. From last couple of months, I noticed multiple sports equipments broken or not worked properly.

Furthermore, I used to play cricket and tennis. But, equipments of cricket such as stumps are missing and tennis net and digital scoreboard are not proper.

As a consequence, we faced multiple issues. Because stumps are essentials for cricket and without stumps we can not play cricket. Also, tennis net and scoreboard important to count points. Thus, I would like to request you to replace or buy new equipments as soon as possible.

I hope you will consider our request and provide solution as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Amit shah

Word Count: 141

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 4

equipments: 4

cricket: 4

tennis: 3

stumps: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the problems and their impact is clear. Minor improvements in the explanation of urgency would enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some improvements in the flow and logical sequencing of ideas would enhance coherence. The grammar errors affect the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. While functional, expanding the range of vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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