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Band 7+: The table below shows how many people visited the Memphis Museum during the year before and the year after its refurbishment. The charts illustrate survey results on how visitors experienced their visit to the museum during those two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: The table below shows how many people visited the Memphis Museum during the year before and the year after its refurbishment. The charts illustrate survey results on how visitors experienced their visit to the museum during those two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays data regarding Memphis Museum visitors and their satisfaction levels. The total visitor count was 68,000 during the year before refurbishment and 89,000 during the following year. A satisfaction survey conducted a year before refurbishment shows: 42.9% rated as very good, 30.8% as good, 13.2% as bad, 8.8% as very bad, and 4.4% did not respond. Post-refurbishment survey results indicate 45.9% very good, 30.6% good, 12.2% bad, 5.1% very bad, and 6.1% no response.

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The table indicates data regarding number of Memphis Museum visitors in total, while the provided pie charts illustrate the percentage of visitor satisfaction the year before and after refurbishment. Overall, it can be seen that a number of visitors increased during the year after refurbishment. This pattern is also reflected in the pie chart, where good feedbacks had the largest proportion after reconstruction.

In the year before the renovation, the museum had 68,000 visitors, and this number increased over time. After the renovation, the number of visitors reached 89,000. A similar pattern can be observed in the pie charts.

In the year before refurbishment, a huge number of people were unsatisfied, and bad responses made up 42.9% of the total, whereas after renovation this figure showed a downward trend (12.2%). Before good feedbacks accounted for the second largest proportion, at 30.8% , although this figure recorded the largest share after reconstruction, at 45.9%. The number of visitors who gave a very bad feedback decreased slightly, from 8.8% to 5.1%. In contrast, very good feedbacks rose moderately, from 13.2% to 30.6%. There were some visitors, who did not gave a feedback, and this share also increased from 4.4% to 6.1%.

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number: 6

visitors: 6

after: 6

before: 4

refurbishment: 3

increased: 3

feedbacks: 3

largest: 3

renovation: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the table and pie charts and making relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported from the pie charts. For example, the report states that 'bad responses made up 42.9% of the total' before refurbishment, but the 'very good' responses were 42.9%. Also, the report states that 'very good feedbacks rose moderately, from 13.2% to 30.6%', but the 'good' responses rose from 30.8% to 30.6%. While the overall trends are captured, accuracy in data reporting is important for a higher score. To improve, ensure careful reading and transcription of data from the visuals.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, body paragraphs, and an overview. However, transitions between some sentences and ideas could be smoother to enhance the flow. For instance, in the last paragraph, the connections between the different feedback categories could be more explicitly linked. Consider using cohesive devices like 'similarly,' 'in contrast,' or 'furthermore' to guide the reader through the comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, effectively describing the data and trends. However, there's room to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary to elevate the writing. For example, instead of 'a huge number of people were unsatisfied,' you could use 'a significant proportion of visitors expressed dissatisfaction.' Also, consider varying your synonyms for words like 'increased' and 'decreased' to showcase a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures. However, there are a few instances where grammatical precision could be improved. For example, check for subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout the report. Pay close attention to the use of articles (a, an, the) and prepositions, as errors in these areas can sometimes affect clarity. Reviewing the report for these minor errors will enhance its overall grammatical accuracy.

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