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Band 7+: The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a table with groups and data points for the years 2011 and 2012, along with the percentage of change. For "All ages," 2011 has 4,381,269 and 2012 has 4,410,284 with +0.6% change. For "Under 15," 2011 has 898,160 and 2012 has 896,364 with -0.2% change. For "15-39," 2011 has 1,577,256 and 2012 has 1,574,102 with -0.2% change. For "40-64," 2011 has 1,331,907 and 2012 has 1,339,898 with +0.6% change. For "65+," 2011 has 573,946 and 2012 has 596,903 with +4.0% change.

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The given bar chart gives information about population figures for New Zealand from 2011 to 2012.

Looking from an overall perspective it is readily apparent that the New Zealand population increased slightly over the measured years. Additionally, people aged 15-35 years old was the highest figure during the period. Moreover, while the figures for those aged under 40 saw a down trend, the opposite was true for the others aged.

From 2011 to 2012, the population of New Zealand rose slightly by 0,6% from 4381269 to 4410284 indivuduals. While the number of people aged over 65 saw the biggest increase by 4% from 573,946 to 596,903, the number of people aged 40-64 years old increased by 0.6%, rising from 1,331,907 to 1,339,898.

Meanwhile, people aged 15-39 saw a gradual fall by 0,2% from 1,577,256 to 1,574,102. Similarly, the figure for people aged under 15 years old also declined by 0.2%, dropping from 898,160 to 896,364 people respectively.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 6

years: 4

population: 3

zealand: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons. It correctly identifies the overall increase in population and highlights the largest increase in the 65+ age group. However, there are minor inaccuracies: the task refers to a table, but the report calls it a bar chart; the age group '15-39' is incorrectly stated as '15-35' in the overview; and the percentage change for 40-64 is given as +0.6% but the report says 'increased by 0.6%' which is correct, but the overall change is also +0.6%, which might be confusing. Additionally, the report omits the specific percentage change for the 15-39 and under 15 groups in the body, though it mentions them in the overview. Overall, the response is relevant and sufficient, with only minor lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices is effective, and the progression of ideas is logical. Minor improvements could be made by ensuring that the overview clearly states the main trends and that the paragraphs are balanced in length.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'rose', 'increased', 'declined'). However, there is room for more sophisticated and varied lexical choices. For example, 'down trend' could be replaced with 'downward trend', and 'indivuduals' is a spelling error. Using more precise terms like 'experienced a decline' or 'saw a rise' would enhance the lexical range. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are a few minor errors, such as 'indivuduals' (spelling) and 'saw a down trend' (should be 'saw a downward trend'). Additionally, the use of commas in numbers is inconsistent (e.g., '4381269' vs '573,946'). Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but these small errors prevent a higher score.

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