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Band 4+: The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a table with groups and data points for the years 2011 and 2012, along with the percentage of change. For "All ages," 2011 has 4,381,269 and 2012 has 4,410,284 with +0.6% change. For "Under 15," 2011 has 898,160 and 2012 has 896,364 with -0.2% change. For "15-39," 2011 has 1,577,256 and 2012 has 1,574,102 with -0.2% change. For "40-64," 2011 has 1,331,907 and 2012 has 1,339,898 with +0.6% change. For "65+," 2011 has 573,946 and 2012 has 596,903 with +4.0% change.

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the table illustrates information about the residents of new zealand between 2011 and 2012 by age group

overall it is clear that the population of new zealand increased significantly over the period.two age group’s percentage rose whereas other two group decreased.

Looking at the details all population increased it was approximately 4.8 million in 2011 after that it changed to almost 4.4 million. The group of 40|64 experienced the largest rise compared to other age groups. two category’s percentage of population dropped to same amont.

on the other hand 1539 age group always constituded the majority of the poulation in 2011 and 2012. compared to that 65 plus people constitude lowest percantage of population it was 573.946 in 2011 then it changed to 569.903 in 2012. furthermore under 15 and 1539 fell two percentage of society. to summarize all age of citizenry climed slightly over in one year 2011 to 2012

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the population changes across age groups, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the overall population figures are misstated (approximately 4.8 million instead of 4.38 million), and the 65+ group's 2012 figure is incorrect (569,903 instead of 596,903). Additionally, the report fails to mention the specific percentage changes for each group, which are key features. The structure is somewhat disorganized, and there are grammatical and spelling errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include all relevant comparisons, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the organization is unclear and the flow is disrupted by frequent errors. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. The reader has to work to follow the message due to abrupt transitions and unclear referencing. To improve, focus on clear paragraphing (e.g., one paragraph for overview, one for details), use a range of linking words appropriately, and ensure each sentence logically connects to the next.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'constituded', 'poulation', 'climed'). There is an attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'residents', 'citizenry') but these are not always accurate. The report lacks the range and precision needed for a higher band. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'increase', 'decline', 'remain stable'), use precise terms for data (e.g., 'approximately', 'just over'), and avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly impede understanding. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, verb tense, pluralization, and sentence structure. For example, 'two age group's percentage rose' should be 'two age groups' percentages rose', and 'it was approximately 4.8 million' is incorrect. The range of grammatical structures is very limited, with mostly simple sentences. To improve, practice writing clear, accurate sentences, review basic grammar rules (e.g., plural forms, verb tenses), and proofread your work to eliminate errors.

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