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Band 6+: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image presents numerical data regarding Ashdown Museum visitors and their satisfaction surveys, with 74,000 visitors before refurbishment and 92,000 in the year after. Pie charts illustrate satisfaction levels: before refurbishment, 40% were dissatisfied, 30% satisfied, 15% responded very satisfied, 10% very dissatisfied, 5% gave no response; after refurbishment, 35% satisfied, 35% very satisfied, 15% dissatisfied, 5% very dissatisfied, 10% no response.

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The table shows the number of tourists that visited Ashdown Meseum within the year before and after it was refurbished. The pie charts illustrate the outcome of the surveys asking visitors how satistisfied they were regarding their tour, within the same two periods.

Overall, the Ashdown Museum experienced higher number of visitor after refurbishment. There was a considerable increase in satisfaction of tours after refurbishment, yet the users with no response remained constant.

Before refurbishment the museum had 74,000 visitors, whereas the vistors increased to 92,000 after refurbishment. The survey before refurbishment had approximately 30% satisfied visitors, whereas it increased marginally to 40%, very satisfied tourist increased significantly from 15% to 35% after the refurbishment.

In contrast, the dissatisfied tourists decreased considerably from 40% to 15%, very dissatisfied visitors fell moderately from 10% to 5%. The users which showed no response remain same at 5% before and after the refurbishment of museum.

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after: 6

refurbishment: 6

visitors: 4

before: 3

museum: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting the main features of the data and making relevant comparisons. It clearly identifies the overall increase in visitor numbers and the shift towards higher satisfaction after refurbishment. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies and omissions: the 'satisfied' percentage is stated as 40% after refurbishment, but the data shows 35%; the 'no response' category is described as remaining constant at 5%, but it actually changed from 5% to 10%. Additionally, some spelling errors (e.g., 'Meseum', 'satistisfied', 'vistors') and minor grammatical issues slightly detract from clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting and proofread for spelling and grammar.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, and the information is presented in a logical order. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which can make the message harder to follow. For example, the sentence 'The users which showed no response remain same at 5% before and after the refurbishment of museum' is unclear due to subject-verb agreement and word choice. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') more effectively to link sentences and ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data, such as 'considerable increase', 'increased marginally', and 'decreased considerably'. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'Meseum', 'satistisfied', 'vistors') and some repetitive or imprecise word choices (e.g., 'users' instead of 'visitors', 'remain same' instead of 'remained the same'). To improve, expand your range of synonyms (e.g., 'rose', 'climbed', 'plummeted') and ensure correct spelling and word forms to demonstrate more natural and sophisticated control of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a variety of sentence structures, including comparisons and contrasts, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('the users which showed no response remain same'), incorrect verb tense ('the vistors increased' should be 'visitors increased'), and missing articles ('higher number of visitor' should be 'a higher number of visitors'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the errors in grammar and word choice reduce the overall accuracy. To improve, focus on proofreading for common errors, practice using correct verb tenses, and ensure subject-verb agreement throughout the report.

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