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Band 7+: The table details international tourist arrivals, in millions, in eight countries in 2009 and 2010, as well as the changes in percentages.

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The image features a table with four columns: Country, In 2009 (millions), In 2010 (millions), and Change. The values for each country are: France with 76 in 2009, 76 in 2010, and +0 change; US with 66 in 2009, 67 in 2010, and +1.5%; Spain with 55 in 2009, 56 in 2010, and +1.8%; UK with 55 in 2009, 57 in 2010, and +3.6%; Italy with 44 in 2009, 45 in 2010, and +2.3%; Turkey with 33 in 2009, 45 in 2010, and +33%; China with 22 in 2009, 34 in 2010, and +55%; Germany with 11 in 2009, 23 in 2010, and +109%; and Hong Kong with 10 in 2009, 9 in 2010, and -11%.

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The table illustrates the number of tourists in millions and changes in percentages in eight countries in 2009 and 2010.

Overall, the number of international tourists in all countries grew with the exceptions of France, where it stayed the same and the largest number of tourists, and Hong Kong, where it saw a decline. It is also clear that the number of tourists in Germany almost doubled compared with the previous year.

The number of travellers in France remained the same without any changes, with 76 million tourists in both years. In contrast, tourists in Hong Kong decreased from 10 in 2009 to 9 million, experiencing a -11% change, standing last throughout the period. The number of tourists in the USA rose by 1,5% from 66 in 2009 to 67 million in 2010, while, in Spain, it increased by 1,8% to 56 million in 2010 from 55 million in 2009. Regarding the UK and Italy, they increased by 3,6% and 2,3% from 55 to 57 in 2010 in the former and from 44 in 2009 to 45 million in 2010 in the latter.

When it comes to Turkey, the number of visitors rose by 33%, from 33 in 2009 to 45% in 2010, whereas, in China, it went by 55% to 34% in 2010. Finally, the number of tourists increased to twice the number of the previous year, with 109%, to 23 million.

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tourists: 8

million: 7

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and detailed comparisons of tourist arrivals across the countries. The overall trend is clearly identified, and key data points are included. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the incorrect percentage for Turkey (stated as 45% instead of 45 million) and the omission of the 2010 figure for China. Additionally, the phrase 'in Germany almost doubled' is slightly imprecise given the exact 109% increase. To improve, ensure all numerical values are accurately reported and avoid minor slips in units. The structure and clarity are strong, and the report meets the requirements well.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and a division into paragraphs. The progression from the overview to specific details is easy to follow. However, some transitions could be smoother, and the final paragraph could be better linked to the preceding ones. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate and accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'travellers', 'visitors', 'tourists'). There is an attempt to use a range of expressions, but some phrases are repetitive (e.g., 'the number of tourists') and a few word choices are slightly informal or imprecise (e.g., 'went by' instead of 'increased by'). To improve, use more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'witnessed a rise', 'experienced growth', or 'saw a significant surge'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including comparative and superlative forms. However, there are several errors that affect clarity and accuracy. For example, 'from 33 in 2009 to 45% in 2010' should be 'to 45 million', and 'it went by 55% to 34% in 2010' should be 'it increased by 55% to 34 million'. Also, the use of commas and decimal points is inconsistent (e.g., '1,5%' vs '1.8%'). To improve, proofread carefully and ensure that all numerical data is presented accurately and consistently.

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