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Band 6+: The table provides data on the proportion of households in New Zealand owning electronic goods in 1998 and 2002. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image includes a table with percentages of households in New Zealand having electronic goods in 1998 and 2002. In 1998: washing machine 98%, color TV 97%, video recorder 75%, computer 50%, cell phone 20%, dishwasher 18%, digital camera 2%. In 2002: washing machine 98%, color TV 97%, cell phone 85%, computer 78%, video recorder 60%, dishwasher 55%, digital camera 39%.

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The table compares at the percentages of residents in New Zealand, which having electronic items in the years 1998 and 2002.

It is clear that computer, cell phones, dishwasher and digital camera items increased significantly, and using color TV improved slightly. However, users of video recorder decreased in 2002. The washing machines was the highest proportion in the both years, but digital camera users were the least.

In 1998, the households of New Zealand used washing machines (98%), while this percentage did not change in 2002. The second largest proportion was color TV’s consumers (95%), and rose only 2% by 2002. The figure for computers was 50%, and the next four years reached to 78%. Meanwhile, cell phones was 20%, but it rose fourfold in 2002. The video recorders was 75%, and this figure decreased 15%. In addition, the percentage of dishwashers was 18%, and it increased nearly three times. The digital cameras was minimum (2%), and then it reached 39%.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the information and making relevant comparisons. There is a clear overview and the main trends are identified. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., color TV percentages) and the language could be more precise. To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and vary sentence structures for a more sophisticated presentation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a reasonable overview, but the organization could be improved. The introduction is adequate, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Grouping the data into categories (e.g., items with significant increases, items with decreases, and items with little change) would enhance coherence. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are instances of imprecise word choice ('which having', 'users of video recorder'). Expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and proportions would be beneficial. For example, use words like 'approximately tripled' instead of 'increased nearly three times'. Also, avoid informal language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('reached to 78%'), subject-verb agreement issues ('washing machines was'), and awkward phrasing ('rose only 2% by 2002'). Pay closer attention to sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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