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Band 5+: The two maps below show a housing estate now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image depicts two layouts of a housing estate. The current layout features eight four-bedroom houses aligned along private roads, with trees dispersed across the area; seven houses are clustered towards the top and two on the bottom. In the reconstruction plan, the housing estate is restructured to include ten one, two, or three-bedroom houses around a central flower garden; new features such as a lake, tennis court, parking area, and parking road are introduced alongside main road adjustments; the houses and amenities are encircled by trees.

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The pictures depict future transformation of a housing estate and its current design.

In general, it is expected that there will be some additional activity areas as well as space for parking. Therefore most of houses will be replaced by other types of houses with deforestation.

The first picture shows housing estates current features. There are four bedroom houses that are spreaded in that state , surrounded by so many trees. Mainroad is located in above the housing estate, linked to private road , which is a shape of semi-circle.

The future plan of this area will include medium size of lake and right opposite , there will be also tennis court. The houses which are four-bedroom will be replaced with one , two, three bedroom houses. At the end of the area , there will be built a new parking space . Moreover, some trees will be located in the center of the area , and it will be linked with main road by private road.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the current layout is adequate, but the future plan lacks detail and clarity. The language is generally understandable but could be more precise and varied. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about the changes and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe the features.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key changes, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. The flow of information is somewhat disjointed, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs could be strengthened. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the comparison. For example, you could use phrases like 'In contrast to the current layout' or 'Similarly' to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some word choices are not entirely accurate (e.g., 'spreaded'). Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language to paint a clearer picture of the changes. For instance, instead of 'additional activity areas,' you could specify what kind of activity areas are being added. Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense ('are spreaded'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the report's professionalism. Focus on proofreading carefully to identify and correct these mistakes. Also, try to vary your sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical control.

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