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Band 6+: The two maps below show a park as it is today and planned changes that will be completed in 2020.

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The image shows two diagrams comparing current and new park designs. The current park features a football pitch, duck pond, main lawn, water fountain, sheltered area, clubhouse, and a variety of trees. The new park design, slated to be completed in 2020, includes a sports field, dog park, main lawn, water fountain, sheltered area, clubhouse, restrooms, a car park, cafe and restaurant, and provides free Wi-Fi throughout.

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The two maps illustrate how a park will be changed from now into in 2020. Overall, the new plan priotizes how combinient and friendly for the users to access and spend time there much more than the current one.

Firstly, there will be significant three changes in terms of geographic issues. Dog park will be set in south-west by making the road move to north and big space. Club house also will be built instead of duck pond. Spacious car park and restrooms will be seen in north-east forest.

Secondly, sports field will appear in a place where football pitch is now. In addition, café and restaurant will be seen instead of club house now. These changes will be done similarly without rebuilding but renovating.

Water fountain and sheltered area in man lawn will be preserved and remain as they are now exactly.

In conclusion, this plan seems to bring more people to the new park because it is based more user friendly.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the current and planned park designs. However, the organization could be improved for clarity, and there are some inaccuracies and omissions. To improve, focus on providing a more structured overview, ensuring accurate descriptions of the changes, and expanding on the comparisons between the two maps.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and conclusion are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions between ideas. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to guide the reader through the comparisons and changes. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast to the current layout' or 'Similarly to the existing park'. Paragraphing is generally acceptable, but could be more skillfully managed to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of range and precision. Some word choices are slightly awkward ('combinient', 'friendly for the users'). Try to use more specific and varied vocabulary to describe the changes and features of the park. For example, instead of 'big space,' you could use 'extensive area' or 'spacious enclosure.' Focus on using synonyms and paraphrasing to demonstrate a wider lexical range. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'priotizes how combinient' (prioritizes convenience), 'significant three changes' (three significant changes), and incorrect preposition usage ('in terms of geographic issues'). Sentence structure is generally simple, and while this aids in conveying information, it limits the demonstration of grammatical range. Focus on improving accuracy by carefully proofreading for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word order. Incorporating more complex sentence structures would also enhance the overall quality of the report.

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