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Band 7+: There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The image shows two maps of "Paradise Island," labeled "Past" and "Present." "Past" features a beach, pier, boat, scientific research station, natural spring, and rocks, all surrounded by the sea. "Present" includes a beach (sectioned off for swimming), pier, cruise ship, hotel complex, cycle path, BBQ area, open restaurant, scenic lookout, swimming pool, cafe, and rocks, also surrounded by the sea.

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The two maps compare the layout of Paradise Island in the past with its present layout.

Overall, the island has undergone significant changes in its layout, including the addition of various infrastructures to accommodate tourists.

One substantial change is that the Scientific Research Station has been renovated into a hotel complex along with a swimming pool. Furthermore, tourists are now permitted to swim at the beach located southwest of the layout. A bunch of trees had been cut down to make space for the open restaurant and BBQ area.

Apart from the changes and removals, there has been many landmarks added to the current layout. A cafe has been added located southeast of the natural spring. Additionally, a scenic lookout has also been built beside the rocks. One interesting change is that the pier has been expanded to accommodate tourists that are now travelling to Paradise Island by a cruise ship.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Task Response

The report appropriately covers the requirements of the task, providing a clear overview of the changes to Paradise Island. The main features are selected and reported effectively, and comparisons are made where relevant. There are a few minor omissions, such as not mentioning the cycle path. To further improve, ensure all key features are mentioned and consider adding more specific details to enhance the description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and overall summary. The information is presented logically, and the paragraphing is effective. However, transitions between sentences and ideas could be smoother in some places to enhance the flow of the report. For example, in the third paragraph, the connection between the removal of trees and the construction of the restaurant and BBQ area could be more explicitly stated.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using terms like 'renovated,' 'infrastructure,' and 'accommodate.' However, there are instances where the language could be more precise or sophisticated. For example, 'A bunch of trees had been cut down' could be rephrased for greater impact. Consider using more varied vocabulary to describe the changes and additions to the island.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. However, attention to detail in sentence structure and word choice could further improve the accuracy. For example, 'there has been many landmarks added' should be 'there have been many landmarks added.' Reviewing and correcting these minor errors will enhance the overall quality of the report.

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