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Band 5+: There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting the public suggest some changes that could be made

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Dear sir,

I want to draw your kind attention towards the irregularities of bus timings in my area.

As per the data your company holds, our area has a large numbers of Passengers. People range from 3 years to 70 years has been associated with daily travelling. whereas 40 percentage are students and 50 percentage are full time employers from this group. Due to changing schedule of bus, These 2 groups have been affected a lot in last 2 months. Students have missed their school and workers are reaching late on job.

I would suggest you that fix the time-table of bus in our area. moreover, add 2 buses extra if Possible. One each for early morning and after 10:00 Pm.

Hope you will pay your undivided attention to most important problem of my area.

Your Sincerly,

Jack.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear description of the problems, their impact, and suggestions for improvement. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not always presented in a logical order, and the use of cohesive devices is inconsistent.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of inaccurate or inappropriate word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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