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Band 5+: There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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Dear colleagues,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter about the annual work party. We are going to organize this party next month.

This year, we are going to make the party more entertaining by adding more games. One more thing, I want to provide a more variety of drinks, and I want do more decorating this time.

Last year, we did a great job but few things we can improve this time as I already mention we need to provide more variety of drinks, As we know ours employees are from different cultures .I want to play different cultural musical so everybody can enjoy.

For the meeting I am wondering room number 110 will be okay for us. if you have more questions please let me know.

sincerely,

Sam

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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions for improvement are clear. However, the response could be more detailed and persuasive. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate, but the range could be expanded for a higher score. More precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact.

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