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Band 5+: There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, Describe the construction Explain why the construction is a problem for you Say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam,

l am writing to complain about the construction which taking place near my home.

The construction which near my home, there is a lot of noise. l am working for five days in a week for that I need some time to rest in weekend. They work until late hours and weekend so I can not rest and I always be late for job if works continued like that I will lost my job.

They should change the works time and days. I would like to them to respect resident of the street.The construction’s workers should regulate that work hours and days. For example, they can work when we leave our home at 9 am to – 5 pm. and they must stop working on weekend.

l want to from local council solution this problem. l hope this situation can be resolved as soon as possible.

Your faithfully,

Delil korkut

Word Count: 154

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by describing the construction and explaining why it is a problem. However, there are some lapses in content and the explanation could be more detailed. It would be better to provide specific details about the type of construction and the exact disturbances caused by the noise. Additionally, the request to the local council could be more specific and include potential solutions to the problem.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is somewhat clear but lacks coherence and cohesion. The ideas are not consistently organized, and there are some abrupt shifts between sentences. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the letter would benefit from a more structured approach with clear topic sentences for each paragraph.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a range of vocabulary used, but it lacks precision and accuracy. Some words are used incorrectly, and there is a need for more sophisticated and natural language. Additionally, the letter would benefit from more varied and precise vocabulary to express ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates some control of grammar and a variety of structures, but there are frequent errors in punctuation, verb tense, and sentence structure. It would be beneficial to pay more attention to sentence structure and punctuation to improve overall accuracy.

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