Line Graph

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The image displays a line graph from 1981 to 2007 detailing spread consumption in grams: Margarine initiates in 1981 at 90g, rising to ~100g by 1986, peaking at ~100g in 1991, then declining to ~40g by 2007; Butter starts at 140g in 1981, increases to 160g in 1986, then falls sharply to ~50g by 2007; Low-fat & reduced spreads emerge in 1996 at ~10g, increasing to 80g in 2001, before ending at ~70g in 2007.

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The diagram illustrates the trends of spreads consumption: margarine, butter and low fat & reduced spreads.

Overall, butter once was the most consumed product amongst these three, but witnessed a drastic fall, while low fat & reduced spread, which was introduced on this graph later than other of these products quickly became the most consumed one.

Butter was the most consumed product, peaking in 1986 with 160 grams consumed, but then sharply declining until 2007 with around 50 grams. Margarine, on the other hand, was more stable till 2001, slightly fluctuating between 100 and 80 grams, but then witnessed a fall-off all the way down to 40 grams of it consumed by the middle of the 2007.

Low fat & reduced spread went through the different trend. It appeared on the mass market in 1996 and rocketed from 10 grams to more than an 80 grams in the cycle of 5 years, peaking and becoming the most consumed type of spread. In 2007, it slightly declined to approximately 70 grams, but held its position.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

grams: 7

consumed: 6

&: 3

reduced: 3

spread: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the information presented in the line graph. The overview is clear, and the main trends are well-identified. The report is well-organized, with a clear progression from overall trends to specific details. To further enhance the response, consider including more specific data points to support the descriptions of trends. Also, ensure precise language is used when describing quantities and timeframes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The overall trends are clearly presented in the introduction, and the subsequent paragraphs provide more detailed information about each type of spread. However, transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of the report. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to connect ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to describing trends and quantities. Words like 'fluctuating,' 'fall-off,' and 'rocketed' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more precise vocabulary to describe the changes and quantities, and avoid repetition of words like 'consumed'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. There are a few minor errors, such as subject-verb agreement ('spread...became') and article usage ('other of these products'). Pay closer attention to these details during proofreading to improve accuracy. Also, ensure correct use of prepositions and conjunctions for clarity.

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